I agree with what he said, and for example, the kicks are a little too heavy. Im not even using my studio speakers rn im using my beats and its making a distorted kinda crunchy bass noise, which can f up ur speakers. Just a little touch up using an eq can fix it up. Try lowering the high end a little so its not so tingy and take out some of the deep deep bass from it, since you seem to have a bassline/pad in the background of the track anyway. Other than those few thing that Gramo said and I said, it seems great so far.
on Taking the reign by nygtcrawler