need to add bit of high frequecies in your voice recording, and less low frequency makes your voice more rhythmical, wil make your voice clicking with the drums. you got something in your song, hip hop needs more , little more of conjunctions in rhythms.
more words means busy, busy can be chaos, if you can make it in a perfect rhyhtmic row, then it will be like one achievement
Commented on Girl Gamer by drinkinstein
need to add bit of high frequecies in your voice recording, and less low frequency makes your voice more rhythmical, wil make your voice clicking with the drums. you got something in your song, hip hop needs more , little more of conjunctions in rhythms.
more words means busy, busy can be chaos, if you can make it in a perfect rhyhtmic row, then it will be like one achievement