damn its a pretty good song, the thing I would give advice on is mabey more confidence in your voice. At the same time though you did a really good job and your voice being soft matches the mood of the song :) good job
The confidence thing is about to change. I'm going through an ftm transition and my voice is going to get deeper. I already am starting to feel more confident in my mind and I'm just waiting for my body to follow :P But I can bet you guys will hear big changes confidence-wise soon.
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record I'll email you lyrics, I like how the hook is added too.
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