The track is hot, the lyrics, are cool, but your delivery only really works on the hook. Im not sure if you trying to do both, rhyme and produce but you should probably just pick one, that way, it's not so much pressure....But that spanish shit Im hearing is kinda off the wall...is that spanish...Naww...that shit German ain't it....!!!! That part is hot as shit!!!
I LOVE IT!!! THE BEAT IS SICK...I LOVE THAT LINE YOU SUSAN LUCCI NIGGAS NEED TO REHEARSE!!!
ONE OF THE HOTTEST TRACKS I HAVE HEARD ON HERE...YES..I HOPE IM NOT DICK RIDING BUT THAT JOINT IS SERIOUS, AND IT'S FUNNY.....
on Father by BubbaBeatz
on What happened with Hip Hop by Kuma
on N.COCKITBACK by STYLEZ1K
on We R Not Evil (feat. Clarance Boddyker) by Da_Rippa
ONE OF THE HOTTEST TRACKS I HAVE HEARD ON HERE...YES..I HOPE IM NOT DICK RIDING BUT THAT JOINT IS SERIOUS, AND IT'S FUNNY.....
on RPG by waggly