Awesome song, love it. I'm blown away by the fact that you also play all the instruments.
Only thing I would like more of is to hear your voice cutting through the mix, you've got a great voice with a real nice tone, and feel that it should be more prominent in the song.
I might have said this before, but you really remind me of Doctor Octogan.
Love the tune, and the message, it's something we can all relate to at one point or another.
And this is so much better to my ears than commercial gangster rap as well, could quite happily listen to a full album of yours. Keep up the good work my friend, and thanks for sharing :)
Yknow , Ive never heard a Dr. Octagon track
regardless really means a lot - you coming out showing support and im really glad you enjoyed the track
im working on new music, got a couple projects out but im trying to put a new one together to capture my sound better
thank you so much peril
cheers
-CAP
Hey MildPeril, I am glad you enjoyed the sax riff. Ha ha... It doesn't take much time to create a track like this. If you notice I am repeating several areas with minor variations in each loop. I play some smooth jazz chords in the bridge\change to break up the monotony. The sax if fun to solo so I find myself using it too much. I am going to create a trumpet solo track soon. Stand by. Thanks for your comments and the FAV.
Always loved your music Marnie, just a shame we don't get to hear more of it.
Would be great to do another song with one of your instrumentals sometime, as I really enjoyed singing over the top of them, and still practice with one or two of them from time to time.
Really hope to see you uploading again in the near future.
Really like your style, so chilled yet raw and evocative. Would quite happily listen to more of this, and will definitely be keeping an eye out in the future to see what you come up with.
wow. thank you a lot peril. realy do appreciate that.
you keep listening and there will keep being something to listen to :)
thank you so much
cheers
-CAP
Criticism is welcome... and deserved. I have so much going on that I have a hard time staying focused on any one thing. My recording skills suck and it shows. Still.... I get great pleasure writing, singing and performing. Thank you for taking time to listen and give helpful advice... I appreciate it
Great song man, love the lyrics. Just a shame the vocals aren't more pronounced as you've got a real drive to your voice that sometimes seems to get a little lost among the instrumental.
Still really enjoyed it though, and thanks for sharing :)
Yeah, I'm a terrible sound man and I get frustrated when recording, then it's down hill from there. Thank goodness there's no laws forbidding a redo. :D
Thanks mildperil!
Really great job. Instrumentals, vocals and lyrics are really good, but feel there was a missed opportunity to really belt the vocal out on the main instrumental part and take the song up a level or two.
Still really enjoyed it though, and thanks for sharing :)
That's actually really lovely, and took me back to somewhere that I can't quite remember. Quite Orb like in parts, and in other parts I could imagine it being played on the t.v. on a loop over some random graphics. Very hypnotic.
Yeah, I recognize that 80'2 feel. I guess it's partly because of the keys. just liked the sound of it. It was no intention at all to make ik sound like 80's :). Often I feel a track is moving itself into a certain direction when creating it. Same happened to this one. And when I put in Farisha's vocals, it was all clear what it needed to be :)
on Return Of The Hobbit Two by DijamMusic
Took me on a real journey... somewhere.
Such a great rhythm to it, was tapping my feet and nodding my head right the way through, and just didn't want it to end.
Thanks for sharing :)
Sorry for late replay.
Glad you like it.
Thanks again.
Jamid
on Take My Time - CAP - FREESTYLE by tsochai
Thanks for sharing :)
much love thank you
-CAP
on There she goes by nln1
Really nice sound though, love it. Thanks for sharing :)
thank you!
on x Pure by Someonenew
Although I think some gentle vocals could really take this up a few levels, it just feels ripe for it.
Really like the style of the piano though.
Thanks for sharing :)
Vocals, maybe someday..
on The Whole World by ImproveWithError
Only thing I would like more of is to hear your voice cutting through the mix, you've got a great voice with a real nice tone, and feel that it should be more prominent in the song.
Other than that, thanks for sharing :)
on Strange Jazz by Indieground
In my mind it would be a husky sounding female, whispering or talking quietly.
Really enjoyed that, thanks for sharing :)
on Tell Me TWO - CAP - FULL SONG by tsochai
Love the tune, and the message, it's something we can all relate to at one point or another.
And this is so much better to my ears than commercial gangster rap as well, could quite happily listen to a full album of yours. Keep up the good work my friend, and thanks for sharing :)
regardless really means a lot - you coming out showing support and im really glad you enjoyed the track
im working on new music, got a couple projects out but im trying to put a new one together to capture my sound better
thank you so much peril
cheers
-CAP
on My Second Cup - By RoNaBO by ronabo
If you managed to make this in between cups of coffee, then that is some talent.
Thanks for sharing. Can't wait to hear more in the future :)
Ronabo.
on melody by DivadyAlbum2
on Marnie Grant - Atmosphere by MarnieG
Would be great to do another song with one of your instrumentals sometime, as I really enjoyed singing over the top of them, and still practice with one or two of them from time to time.
Really hope to see you uploading again in the near future.
:)
on Ashes - CAP - FULL SONG by tsochai
Thanks for sharing :)
you keep listening and there will keep being something to listen to :)
thank you so much
cheers
-CAP
on Life Flows by ronabo
Thanks for sharing :)
Life flows... go with the flow
Ronabo
on Build A House by ALXSIX
on Somethings Not right by davepowell1
Only small criticism is to let that great voice of yours cut through the mix a little more.
Other than that, really loved it. Thank you!
on We Never Learn by davepowell1
Still really enjoyed it though, and thanks for sharing :)
Thanks mildperil!
on Remember feat Austin Bucholtz by Ludwigbroo
Still really enjoyed it though, and thanks for sharing :)
on I Need You by RogueAi
What hardware are you using?
on Old Lady Italy by Orlando51
Love it, thanks for sharing :)
Orlando
on Dj Arloph-Legacy Of Baninko by JCJMusic
Great sound, and thanks for sharing :)
on 175th Wonder of the World by BlancFroid
Thanks for sharing :)
on Adore by AlfredTheButman
Would like to hear some vocals over the top of this, as they could take it up a notch.
Thanks for sharing.
But serious tho, thank you.
on beyond repair by MetalEd
Thanks for sharing.
on In my Sad Brain by FrozenStick
Really great sound, and a lot of fun, which is what a lot of music is missing these days.
Thanks for sharing.
on Heavy Metal Mollie by WARRIORDANIKA
What a tune, and as soon as I'm home alone, this is getting played full blast.
Amazing, and thanks for sharing.
Peace `WARRIOR DANIKA
on By Your Side - Feat Farisha by DrvanLansberg
Enjoyed every second and quite happily listened through to the end. Thanks for sharing :]