This actually sounds like something I'd expect on the radio, which I was not expecting. Well done, and I hope you continue to write like you have been!
I think what I enjoyed most about this track was the somewhat eerie, slightly-out-of-tune synth that was the cornerstone to the rest of the song, and it delivered the entire atmosphere beautifully. Well done, chap!
Okay, like three things here. One: this sounds like the actually backing track to a lyrical song rather than an instrumental, and rather well done at that. Two: You're a little lacking in your midrange on the guitars, which is what's making them sound somewhat hollow. Three: I like your riffs!
I took your advice and turned up my mids and theres definately an improvement. I just posted the song I did this on, "limpdry", and I think it has more body or like a more bassy tone which is good but the songs style is slighty different than usual, idk. If u get to it check it out and please let me know what u think.... Like all my tunes, it also lacks a bass line to give everything that beefyness, peace.
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