ArtfulOne

The Artful One Raptor Red

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Joined : 14th Aug 2013 - 12 years ago

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ArtfulOne has posted 37 comments on other peoples tracks.

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ArtfulOne 5th Nov 2013 14:48 - 12 years ago

on night and day feat Morpheused by Sherris

Very nice. I like the feel that you got here. Great piano. Put together really well. Think I might download just to chill out to.

(I have some of those same loops, but you did great putting them together.)

- The Artful One (Raptor Red)

Sherris replied 9th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

Morpheused is very tallented and I like her loops.your comment makes my day.i'm very glad to read this.i'll check your murics today or tomorrow anyway as soon as possible.

ArtfulOne 5th Nov 2013 02:00 - 12 years ago

on Sik Style - No More Sorrow by SikStyle1

I had to go and download some more of your music. I'm feeling this track. I like it a lot.

- The Artful One

ArtfulOne 4th Nov 2013 01:10 - 12 years ago

on New hiphop beat or rap beat by johnnyproducing

I like the storm at the start.

I like it. The layers work well together. Its a little slow for my style, but I'm sure you will find someone to drop over this.

- The Artful One

johnnyproducing replied 4th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

Thank you for the comment, went with a bpm of 95 which might be indeed a bit slow but most hiphot/rapbeats have that same tempo or somewhat around that.
I am glad you liked it and I hope to find someone to do the vocals then.

ArtfulOne 4th Nov 2013 01:04 - 12 years ago

on Sik Style - Fade Away by SikStyle1

I'm digging this. Your style is sick (no pun intended.) As a fellow rapper, I love it when I hear something that just impresses me, and this did it. Its so different from me, and I'm blown away by it. Great job.

- The Artful One

SikStyle1 replied 4th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

Hell yeah thanks bro! I like your song when the world ends its dope

ArtfulOne 3rd Nov 2013 13:44 - 12 years ago

on President Turner by Tysane

I kickbox with Jaws. That had me laughing.

I love your wordplay.

You had some good multi's and metta's as well.

I think you should try cleaning up the quality though. You interested in a collab?

- The Artful One

Tysane replied 3rd Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

Yea definitely, my vocals were a problem then but im cleaning them up alil better now.

ArtfulOne 3rd Nov 2013 13:23 - 12 years ago

on Till The End by the47

This is a great beat. I could write to this. I like how heavy it is, but still I'm upbeat about it.

- The Artful One

ArtfulOne 3rd Nov 2013 02:27 - 12 years ago

on Chase Calico by StaticProjekt

Rap instrumentals are my favorite. I'm liking the dark tone that you have going in this one. The synth seems a little out of place to me, but I think that's just personal taste.

ArtfulOne 3rd Nov 2013 01:54 - 12 years ago

on 4D4 DUBSTEP by edzwood

Vocal intro was on point. I can't really give a bad critique to anything here. The wobbles were nice, the pauses, Everything really.

- Artful One

ArtfulOne 3rd Nov 2013 01:50 - 12 years ago

I can tell that you took a long time on this. The work speaks for itself. Good job.

- The Artful One

Saint7x replied 4th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

Thanks Man! Very Much Appreciated!

ArtfulOne 3rd Nov 2013 01:46 - 12 years ago

on When the Queens Come Marching Home by topvega

That guitar is awesome. I like the changeup at 1:05. That was sweet. I dont really see too much of an issue with the drums, I kind of like it.

topvega replied 4th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

Thanks bro...I like JamStix for the fact that it really gives the sound of a real drummer..for good or bad in some cases. :)
The "change" at 105ish is Toadies inspired. Another band I absolutely love. I would recommend their album Rubberneck to everyone.I appreciate you stopping in and giving it a listen and leaving some feedback. I feel like this is definitely my best track so far. It's nice to know others like it as well.

Thanks again.

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ArtfulOne 3rd Nov 2013 01:42 - 12 years ago

on chilled out track for collab by FreshlyMortal

I'm digging this. I might have to drop a verse if thats cool. Its different from my usualy style, but I might have to try something. I really like the fade at 1:06. Nice touch.

ArtfulOne 1st Nov 2013 13:26 - 12 years ago

on Stay in my Heart featuring Far Winter by JamesDavies

I think your lyrics had some great imagery to them. The quality sucks, but I understand not having great equipment to work with. At points it sounded that you got off the beat. This could be two things. 1. The quality just makes it sound this way. 2. You are trying to put all the words in, and hitting your lines past the beat. I like that you sampled "Stay." Great choice. Having a male singer do the hook. Another great choice. If you want to improve on the rapping then get at me. We'll collab and I really think I could help you improve. I can send you some of my stuff if you'd like to take a listen. You got potential. If you like doing it, then keep at it. I listen to tracks I made 10 years ago, and they are not great, but I kept at it and improved.

- The Artful One

JamesDavies replied 10th Nov 2013 - 12 years ago

personally i didn't find any problem putting all the words in but i must agree: the quality sucks ! anyway, thanx for listening and commenting and yeah, i'll check out some of your stuff ^^ i'm happy to collab :)

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