I am not a musician so I can't give constructive advice in that arena, however I will say I like the melody you chose for this, very moving. I enjoyed it. There was a lot of drum which can get repetitive. I am more drawn to tracks which change up their own pace once in a while.
Tip #1: if you write a song before writing the vocal track, don't use pre-recorded autotuned vocal tracks. The one you used in this track sounds completely not matching with the main melody.
Tip #1,5: verify the vocal track and music tempos matching.
Tip #2: in a 2:07 timed song is not the best way using an intro of 0:48 seconds. It sounds too boring.
Tip #3: Maybe you use FL, i don't know. In that case, using some fx in the mixer, making entire sound no flat.
on The Day by Masteruix
on The Day by Masteruix
Tip #1,5: verify the vocal track and music tempos matching.
Tip #2: in a 2:07 timed song is not the best way using an intro of 0:48 seconds. It sounds too boring.
Tip #3: Maybe you use FL, i don't know. In that case, using some fx in the mixer, making entire sound no flat.