appreciate that bro bro.. you got a soundcloud link i can check ?? shoutouts to all the producers for providing that heat though !! i highly suggest you check on Enzotic
Hey, this one sounds quite professional. The music is on-point and is mixed/EQ'd well. The vocals at times are a bit off on a few stanzas, and affect the smoothness of the flow overall (breaks the immersion for a bit) but can easily be fixed. Overall, a very good job and I enjoyed the listen. Great work!
thank you for taking the time to shoot some feedback on more than just one occassion.. my engineer is a student of the game so he'll get better at it but i also think he did a pretty damn good job with what he had to work with.
thank you for bringing up the technical points that are important to a song !
i've also checked out your songs many times before and i hope to work with you in the near future.
I came up with a hook because no one was answering HOWEVER I am always open to letting you try it out as my tape is not finished & maybe it is better than mine ? You could also try your hand at a verse... Im thinking about changing my 2nd verse. 2nd verse is pretty long so we can switch off on lines or whatever is best. or we can also work on another song ? a lot of my mixtape kind of got that trap sound and i also am surprised you got SashaGoHard on your list !! she's dope !!
sending you a message on soundcloud as well.
Nice song music & atmosphere! Very smooth to listen to.
A bit linear, it would deserve more breaks and a bit of change into the beat for the autotune part (i would also have added maybe a bit more of reverb for voices to put them in the air as the sound is, aerial), but that's just an opinion among other.
thanks for the listen & i followed you back ! bout to listen to some of your stuff myself !!
I was looking to add more reverb but my engineer confused it with putting it on the verse instead of the autotune. He did it free of charge so I wasn't going to bug him a 3rd time lol... but overall I thought he did a great job & I am very satisfied with the end result.
Not a bad track bro...needs a lil work on the mix..the vocals needs a deesser or eq'ed a lil better to get that hi freq brightness under control.A lil reverb on the vocals timed to the track would create that space that's missing
and put it in the mix better.Good job on the track.
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i like your mic presence and vibe you give.. itd be my pleasure.
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https://soundcloud.com/demarquz
most of those are pretty old
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Brado
thank you for bringing up the technical points that are important to a song !
i've also checked out your songs many times before and i hope to work with you in the near future.
keep on keeping on... 1 LOVE !!
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I like the voice effect you used at 0.55 min who returns at 2.08 min.
Also the msg is good too. Maybe you could write down the lyrics this will help us to follow.
In addition, you should make minor variations for your drum this will reduce the repetition
Finally I love your outro.
Overall ; even hip hop isn't my favorite genre I passed 3:08 min with pleasure!
not all Hip Hop is bad :) !!
I've included the lyrics to the song just for you and im glad you enjoy the message.
i've also checked your music and i keep on hustling my G !! the skies are unlimited... i liked that cinematic intro you got !
STAY BLESSED !!
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sending you a message on soundcloud as well.
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A bit linear, it would deserve more breaks and a bit of change into the beat for the autotune part (i would also have added maybe a bit more of reverb for voices to put them in the air as the sound is, aerial), but that's just an opinion among other.
Good work!
I was looking to add more reverb but my engineer confused it with putting it on the verse instead of the autotune. He did it free of charge so I wasn't going to bug him a 3rd time lol... but overall I thought he did a great job & I am very satisfied with the end result.
T Y !
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and put it in the mix better.Good job on the track.