NewBasicDubstep

I say throw a multiband comp / limiter on there to bring everything up and you're pretty much bang on, good work man :)

This is great, with some more work and more length, this has much potential. Like val said you really should give the bassline the attention it deserves, maybe some quick one-off breaks too.

Not a bad go for a first shot. It could use some work, but you're on the right track. It sounds like you're using Massive for this. If that's the case, don't be afraid to add some filters, envelopes and LFO's for movement. It's a good bassline, bring that sucker all the way to life! If it's not Massive, well....the same applies. Kudos none the less. Keep it up!

V.

Pretty awesome for a first try, nice work guys