Hello GadManDubs, thank you, I like it, its awesome. But since it's lay-back beat I feel it needs non repetitive lyrics to go over the beat from start to finish. In my opinion your freestyle acapella fit better since was covering the full length of the beat. Regarding the performance, your rap is awesome, but I have two comments: the recording or processing of the vocals have too much low end and its much louder then the beat (kinda doesn't fit well within the mix), and at 2:08 sounds like you are whispering. Hope you take this as constructive feedback. Thank you for your rap it really does make the beat sound way more interesting.
on Nails Hiphop chill beat by DMetamy
I really like the bass and the horns.
Sounds good. :-)
on Nails Hiphop chill beat by DMetamy
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