Not sure if you were aiming for the dissonance created between the backing track and the vocals.....if it was intentional, then I would call this a great avant garde tune. If not, then perhaps it would be beneficial to allow someone else to add vocals and see what they sound like. Either way, it was an interesting ride.
Oh WOW - Magical!
I love the music you've produced here but the vocals are kind of out of tune for this song, I guess. You should really find some other vocals to it!
What a lovely tune - good job.
Thanks! I've gotten that comment about the vocals alot from various sources of feedback, so I might consider letting others try to write something for the chorus.
I love this - I guess you could call it R&B (the genres just seem increasingly meaningless to me though) but the sounds are unusual and the vocal so wobbly and dreamy, it seems to escape all the cliches of R&B and forge its own path. Yeah it needs verses - and more variation, which the verses should take care of - so I'll be interested to see what you come up with to complete the track. Great start. I hate cliches and I love music that surprises me, as this piece does.
this is a very emotional track kind of scary. I think it's very expressive. From the start I got the image of some one in a hospital and the ending just confirmed it. You nailed that. I don't know the purpose of the track in the sense that if you wanted it to be more musical you have only to add more drums and tempo but I think it was meant to be an emotional ambient piece reminded me of when grand dad died. Keep honing your craft might be hearing your work in some movies soon. I loved the piano and the bass hits really structured the track great job.
I see what you were going for here. The music fits the title to a T. It mentally paints that image of waiting in a waiting room. Music that paints a legitimate picture is golden. This is great. Keep it up.
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If you feel that I can provide something to this let me know.
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I love the music you've produced here but the vocals are kind of out of tune for this song, I guess. You should really find some other vocals to it!
What a lovely tune - good job.
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Good job!
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Love the atmospheric feel
Beautiful choice of sounds,love the tention this carries!
Beautiful mystical thought provoking music!
This is really well created,and kept me hooked from start to finish.!
Very very nice!
I love it!....fave from me!