AidenAngel

Very cool work for what it is. think you are on good path...keep plugging away.
Raven

Drums! Love 'em. Nice job dude!

doing it big for just a student

quite the thumper here, nice beat !
sometimes a track or a song requires no genre,
not so much what it's called or how it's labeled, but how it affects the listener! "this one was cool"

Johnny Gadget

This sounds way better than from when I started out. lol. I came to listen to a track by you after you reviewed my song "Crank Dat Looperman" lol and found this one(mainly because its your only one) lol nice track
I agree with TheHandThatRocksTheDecks (wow thats a long name lol) and what he has to say about the structure other than that this was a good first track. can't wait to hear more from you. keep it up~HHRokstar aka Fareel lol

I really like this track! For a first attempt it is bloody good, Cheers Slap...

a lot of change-ups...nice...mix seems off...synths are a little too loud at times...nice techno track i suppose...

yeah, decks is right ....
it sounds like the trailer for an album ....
but that also means there are a lot of ideas in it!!!

peace, rei

cool track, really good for your first attempt. keep it up.

what an effort for your first track. there are some really cool elements in here. great synths and i love that pad at the start. to improve i would just maybe try and give the song a better structure. in most trance tracks there is a four bar intro, a massive break, kick off with main melody and then an outro. really good effort tho. looking forward to hearing some more.