Good song!
Love that bass drum sound in the first part, you really feel the song breathing. Great!
I have to agree with Danke on the toms fills: they don't really fit the rest of the song.
Very chilly and relaxing. Well done.
Domenico
how you built up is great and I specially like how the drum play, I mean that "live" tune is very unusual in chill, but so groovy as if somebody played it...
may I suggest 2 things? Yes? Thank you! :-)
from 3.11 some synth tune comes in, would you please change it? no? no problem... :-)(so strange here...)
and the tom tom tunes are so "industrial" for this pearl...
thank you for listening,,
i really appreciate your criticism and suggestions..
i feel the same start at 3:11 (sounds strange).. i put a synth kinda reggae rhythm (little sway) in order to produce a tone that is not too mellow and boring..
i can't change this uploaded tracks, just set it as the original. if you want edited one, i can send you the link if you still want it.. :)
Please feel free to put any critism and comments for another next tracks.. I'd love to hear it so that will give me a look and attempt to be more careful in preparing and mixing instruments that can be enjoyed for more listeners..
thank you,
"GREEN" (documentary movie by Patrick Rouxel) inspires me to be more thoughtful before utilizing the goods with ingredients taken from the forest.. :)
I appreciate and am integral with to your "fight" .... This page is a brilliant musical message ....
Thank you for sharing this moment.
Good design ....
thank you ..
I oppose deforestation in pursuit of increased profits that would eliminate forest ecosystems.. :)
but, this brief summary is very ironic and makes me ashamed as Indonesia, a country with a very high rate of deforestation.. :(
The voices sound like instruments, and the music is a beautiful setting for this. What a very unique piece!! You definitely used your creativity in the delivery, in a rare way not always seen here when pellas are used in works.
I'm in awe.
Probably one of the most beautiful masterpieces I've heard featuring vocals of any kind from here.
I feel as though I am at the entrance of heaven, thanks to your great skill!
Definitely downloading for further enjoyment!! Is this on Soundcloud?
towards the end it sounds kinda like progressive house once the beat kicks in. good collab,i recommend some sorta riff with the vocals at the intro,all in all a good track!
on taking my last breath by dejava
Love that bass drum sound in the first part, you really feel the song breathing. Great!
I have to agree with Danke on the toms fills: they don't really fit the rest of the song.
Very chilly and relaxing. Well done.
Domenico
on taking my last breath by dejava
Steve
on taking my last breath by dejava
how you built up is great and I specially like how the drum play, I mean that "live" tune is very unusual in chill, but so groovy as if somebody played it...
may I suggest 2 things? Yes? Thank you! :-)
from 3.11 some synth tune comes in, would you please change it? no? no problem... :-)(so strange here...)
and the tom tom tunes are so "industrial" for this pearl...
great track, DL for sure and for the eternity :-)
thanx for the upload
best wishes, Danke
i really appreciate your criticism and suggestions..
i feel the same start at 3:11 (sounds strange).. i put a synth kinda reggae rhythm (little sway) in order to produce a tone that is not too mellow and boring..
i can't change this uploaded tracks, just set it as the original. if you want edited one, i can send you the link if you still want it.. :)
Please feel free to put any critism and comments for another next tracks.. I'd love to hear it so that will give me a look and attempt to be more careful in preparing and mixing instruments that can be enjoyed for more listeners..
best regards,
on taking my last breath by dejava
on The Missing Playground by dejava
"GREEN" (documentary movie by Patrick Rouxel) inspires me to be more thoughtful before utilizing the goods with ingredients taken from the forest.. :)
on The Missing Playground by dejava
I appreciate and am integral with to your "fight" .... This page is a brilliant musical message ....
Thank you for sharing this moment.
Good design ....
Dan
I oppose deforestation in pursuit of increased profits that would eliminate forest ecosystems.. :)
but, this brief summary is very ironic and makes me ashamed as Indonesia, a country with a very high rate of deforestation.. :(
on The Missing Playground by dejava
Nice and chill, and i love the message with this!!
on Apology feat Romy Harmony and JJ Weekz by dejava
on Apology feat Romy Harmony and JJ Weekz by dejava
on Apology feat Romy Harmony and JJ Weekz by dejava
The voices sound like instruments, and the music is a beautiful setting for this. What a very unique piece!! You definitely used your creativity in the delivery, in a rare way not always seen here when pellas are used in works.
I'm in awe.
Probably one of the most beautiful masterpieces I've heard featuring vocals of any kind from here.
I feel as though I am at the entrance of heaven, thanks to your great skill!
Definitely downloading for further enjoyment!! Is this on Soundcloud?
but it's true that I add your unique voices here at once inspiring me to mix some effects for some instrument in this track..
thank you for sharing your beautiful voices so this track can be completed ..
on undefined by dejava
on be your self feat JJWeekz by dejava
by the way, i jst found unexpected sound in this track so i might have to update it with repaired one..
on i was drawn by dejava