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So sup man I get it trust me, I was once a bass head too. No not the coke sniffing kind. lol But I do agree with the others on the edit to the bass and the mix will flesh out alot nicer. (Some instruments could use some compression as well) But real nice arrangement and snare rolls. Keep working, peace

Gramo/Neo

feelin like wacka flocka ayyy

This is pretty cool. Especially since it's just a mash up of loops. You've clearly got a good ear for loops that work with each other which is a talent in it's self (I hear a lot of people muck it up but this all flows really well)
Can't say as i know much about trap but this was fun to listen to. Shame it finished so abruptly.
FR

In my opinion the samples do not do it for me. I like the lead more. I like the beat but yeah i didnt feel like the 808 were strong enough in the first part but too strong in the second bridge/chorus/verse?. But i guess this is your second beat, right? So no bad work it just needs some work. I love the snare rolls, maybe i am addicted to them. But yeah nice start I just wish it had more cohesiveness throughout the beat and more clarity. Better approach would be treat your listener like he/she is stupid. By that i mean, dont assume them will understand your chorus and main verse because if I were to writing to this I wouldnt understand where the chorus ends and the second verse starts. if you want the rapper to rap on it then it needs to be clear. I think this is great start for you. You have the element down but again just needs some work. THAT LEAD IS SICK.

Man this beat is hard as hell. Very nice, and it sounds pretty clear to me coming thru my set-up,in fact I can just about turn it all the way up.Very nice production

I see u really tried with this, Good work man but there is a lot going on in this. Hey love the creativity but i dont know may be its me but i feel like somethings dont match up with the beat, like i can find a style or feel in the beat. None the less NICE production for your 2nd beat Keep it up
Can't wait to see what u got next :)

Styles

dope idea, just wish it was a lil bit cleaner.

Collab? I'm new to looperman and I love your sound! Check my song out. I sing/rap and I made the beat to the "Jonestown Massacre" song on my page using mostly loops from this site! My friends and family like it so much they told me to put it on iTunes which I did and now its making a buzz in my hometown! Now I need ppl OTHER than friends and fam to critique it. Thanks in advance, look forward to hearing from u.

Really energetic feel on this one!good job!

Always looking for dope beats like this! Hit me up if your up for collabing yo

I'm just now starting to really listen to trap music , so I'm not really fit to give a heavy critique but this sounds great to me. Hi energy with a good flow to it. Nice work!

Cognac

This is nice, man. You've successfully captured that hard, head nodding trap sound, a feat that some mainstream artist may struggle to do. Hats off to you, sir.

this is dope,like the bass drum in there almost nearly smashed my speakers to pieces when the bass kicked in lol,awesome stuff bro,may just want to adjust the bass and snare abit down other then that you got a banger :) keep it

Good work brother.
Looks like you spent a lot of time on this track.
I hear a lot of samples too throughout.

Well my PC speakers are holding out allright until the really heavy bass kicks in like at 4.20, then my speakers start to get muddy. But I'm sure you have tested this track on various type of speakers too.

You're doing great Sniper especially for your second song. Hope you get a rapper/singer collab.
God bless man. - B

im not much for trap..this alright though.nice

in a weird kind of way it comes off to me as a asap mobb type track ,.i like it