MetalEd

rockin intro love it

Hello,
I think you've done a wonderful job here.
Well done.
Jamid

Heavy emotion makes heavy metals
So hard drums

The first thing I noticed is that the kick at the start is way too strong. It is hitting the limiter really hard and its crushing the sound. The electric guitar sounds really cool but I feel that the vocals are overpowering them too much. I think maybe you should take another look at the mix as there seems to be an unfortunate unbalance of volumes here. I know if you work this right I think it'll sound really cool haha. It has a ton of potential!

AWESOME!

ummmmm.... when it started i thought it was a joke but then i just kept listening and thought wow this is for real, and thought holy shit this is actually pretty good , i couldnt stop listening once i started, keep up the good work, great lyrics as well.

It was unexpected to hear a metalhead voice paired with a tender piano lol. But it was still good nonetheless. I like it. Cheers!

Dude, if you can help me make up a dubstep/metal track.. we can do epic shit!

Reverse cymbal is always nice.

This one seems to have more feeling than some of your others. A bit dark and depressed. Some sad subject matter. Hope everything is alright with you.

As for any critique, this track needs guitars, but I like the power your words gave.

This one seems to have an "Embrace Life" vibe, so I dig it very much.

Take care.

Evan

Wow. You have a very interesting voice.
Good song: your vocal part is by far the best thing here. The loops are "brutal" and they work well together, but your voice is really outstanding.
Ciao, Domenico

PS: I read you are a Type-o-Negative fan. We have all their albums at home (my wife was a big fan)
I think that Black-no1 is probably the best goth-rock song ever written.
And I see some traces of Peter Steele's in your vocals.
You have the same way of building vocal melodies which contrast the music (and you work in the "deep" zone, the same as he used to do).
Now you have to learn to play bass ;-)

PPS: Of course I cannot forget to send a thought to one of the most inspired musicians our planet has ever seen.
Hopefully Peter found some peace.

it's a very compelling track. interesting collage of styles. the voice is very dramatic. I like your string writing. nice work!

wow this is fcking weird man xD i read ''rock'' then hear a hiphop beat, then aaawesome rock trough it all xD its awesome man!! hardddd :D

~Eighteen

Damn! Those are some brutal loops you have there.

Every track of yours has a totally creepy vibe that come 100 percent from your vocals. Very "I keep people in my basement" kind of vibe. I'd like to hang out with you, but not at your house.

I've just barely got "Your Cat Yeah" out of my head and now I have this one! This will keep my mind busy at work.

You've had a fan in me for a while now. Take care.

Evan

Damn! Those are some brutal loops you have there.

Every track of yours has a totally creepy vibe that come 100 percent from your vocals. Very "I keep people in my basement" kind of vibe. I'd like to hang out with you, but not at your house.

I've just barely got "Your Cat Yeah" out of my head and now I have this one! This will keep my mind busy at work.

You've had a fan in me for a while now. Take care.

Evan

Love the guitar work Man...Are they loops or did you play that..?
If you did that's the shit right there...For this groove you've got it
hooked up right, I like where the drums sit, creates a solid foundation
for the mad stuff going on...Lead guitar could've jumped at you a little
more to inforce that move, because of what it is....Crazy good...
Vocal...Some of the tuning is clear in spots but haaa... It works...

Cool project...Keep it up...

Peace...TG.

Hi. I started up a forum thread about favourite ever tracks on Looperman and Evisma chose this very track as one of his favourites. I thought you might like to know

https://www.looperman.com/forum/thread/182742/what-are-your-favourite-tracks-on-looperman

You should check the thread out and contribute too.

Anyway, this is some interesting stuff. Kind of ridiculous with the cat thing but the vocals are actually really good. Some pretty strong, soaring tunes in there and the timbre of your voice is good. It's a bit of a singalong thing I could imagine in a southern bar.

The vocals all go perfectly with those loops. Maybe you're asking for someone to use the vocals and completely replace the music. I'm not sure so let me know.

Congrats on an interesting piece of music and good vocal performance.

METAL
I will love to remix you track for you it seems the guitar is too loud and cannot hear the drums and the bass clear send all track separate ie bass , guitar, drums only also I will like to apply key board effect on it I .
I AM LOVIN THE TRACK AS IS.all ready have your vocals.
cheers.
Keep it Heavey metal for Christmal and all the best for 2015
'boogieskippo@aol.com.

Really interesting track. You really kept my interest till the end. Quite a unique piece...Well done!

Ciao,
M.

Lyrics are awesome. Light take on relationships, ilove it

I really enjoyed this track cause I'm a big fan of acoustic music but on the top of that your vocals are really great if not unique...oh, and I liked that creepy vocal insert at the end.:) Big well done to you!

Compliments____Orlando

Has sort of a Black Label Society unplugged feel for me. Over all good vibe. Needs work in the mix department IMO.
Nice job so far.

tv

kinda has a mushroomhead sound

damn, where did you get those sick ass drums?

Awesome track, great vocals!
I am using a lot of your riffs in a project I am calling "Feat Metaled Society". Will upload when finished.
Appreciate the loops, keep up the good work.

Good track metaled.
Good riffs, dark voice (not my preferred tone but fits perfectly the song) good guitar sound.
Maybe in some points the bass could be a bit more present (IMHO... and I am a bass player, so I may be biased).
Overall, a very good metal song!
Keep the good work: we need more of them!
Ciao, Domenico