hey nice track, i really like the bass on it, its sick as hell, a little too repetitive at first, but not too bad, would be more interesting with vocals or something, but still its a really good track, my biggest grievance about this track though, is it lacks originality, feels like i've heard this track a thousand times before, and not just on looperman, but even in main stream music. i think you just need to experiment more and find "your" style. also change it up a bit. take like a section such as a bridge or break down as a chance to keep the listener more interested. change the beat, change the melody, slow it down, speed it up, anything really. it's cool to keep or change a beat for a chorus or hook section, but the melody definitely should have more attention drawn to it in certain sections, such as, a bridge or chorus.
but you definitely have some raw talent that could use a little refining, though music isn't really science, it is a formula and reading into music theory or analyzing your favorite songs could really help refine that raw talent and give you the key to that magic formula
I like this beat, it's smooth. Only suggestion i have is to change the bass and/or hihats, or even introduce a new sound after you switch it up half way through like you did. -Peace
k now thats dope
love that fkn guitar n those drumz n jus everything about this beat makes it some classic ish somethin jeezy cud tear up or even somebody like snoop
love it
if u git a chance check out my new track its the new crew n lv a review
pc
yea you've gotten better fo sho but still this one goes hard. stay with it and you'll get better then you are now. practice makes perfect. keep bangin.
rlly grimey joint here
gun sounds r sick
the drumz give a sick suspese feelin
i love this beat i actually think u did a greta job on it front to back aint nothin i wud change
if u git a chance check out some a my tracks n lv a review
pc
dirty south ish right here. i think you should have labeled this one crunk. sick azz bassline you got here homie. feelin the track. keep bangin dog. check out my new song "coney on the track reeg on the rap" and review if you get a chance my dude. PEACE.
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on beat012811 by OneEightySevenEnt
but you definitely have some raw talent that could use a little refining, though music isn't really science, it is a formula and reading into music theory or analyzing your favorite songs could really help refine that raw talent and give you the key to that magic formula
best of luck
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Manzet
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It gives me the feeling that, i go out to kill someone, haha!
Like the the basses on the kickes!
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Manzet
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It's my opinion, don't worry
on beat052410 by OneEightySevenEnt
love that fkn guitar n those drumz n jus everything about this beat makes it some classic ish somethin jeezy cud tear up or even somebody like snoop
love it
if u git a chance check out my new track its the new crew n lv a review
pc
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on Old Beat From 2007 by OneEightySevenEnt
on beat051910 by OneEightySevenEnt
gun sounds r sick
the drumz give a sick suspese feelin
i love this beat i actually think u did a greta job on it front to back aint nothin i wud change
if u git a chance check out some a my tracks n lv a review
pc
on beat052210 by OneEightySevenEnt