IAMCori

Continue It, i likes It It have potential. I think you can add a Little female vocal in this piano intro After the First 8 bars, then togheter with the vocal add a chord pad, so when the drums starts, create a piano Melody in minor scale arpeggio with a low pass filter on It, with only kick bass and only Little parts of che complete drums loop, so after 4/8 bars to create a fluid and continuity effect leave the low oass filter to the arpeggio like to hear also high freq. , add this piano Melody you dome in this snipp, vito the vocal and the complete drums loop. This Is only my personal taste but Is a concrete good idea for this, if you wanna collab on that write me im Happy to add something of me and tell you some hints and skills, if u think i can help u. Waiting your answer!

I think it needs a baseline and definitely some vocals. I like the melody