Not bad, not bad at all, just one thing, and this may be unnessecary, but if you use loops from other members, maybe refer to who's loops you used. Just a small formality, but very essential, just imagine if someone used your sounds without refering to you. Aside from that nice song!
Yeah Sorry for that. I put that I use some looperman fx loops because I downloaded some fx loops but I don´t remember who where the names of the members and what loops did I used.
But now that is fixed
Also thanks for your comment, really well appreciated
Some parts of this sound very amatuer.
That being said, I also hear a lot of potential ideas and encourage you to continue working on this to have fuller more in the background sounds (I am not a producer so I am not sure how to describe the sound I am thinking of). Everything just sounds so upfront, rather than layers of elements.
This progressed very nicely, getting more indepth as I listened. The orchestra keyboard sound was a bit hokey for me.
Well i'm giving some advice from a listeners/Audio Engineers Point of view.
What I Liked:
Dubstep had good wobbles
lyrics were potentially energetic and provocative
had a decent hook
drums were tight
What I think needs work:
you have too dry of vocals, no reverb or echo, or gates.
You need Multi tracks to answer yourself in "Who, -WHO, Gonna Stope me" Lyric. additionally you'd want to put that in the back a bit so it gives it more "Space"
It was hard to hear clearly the pronunciation of the fast rap lyrics
the rapping wasn't "in time" with the beat.
the Dubstep had too much going on crashing into one another, you would probably want to aim for the listener to catch up with you.
That's my advice, take it or leave it. potentially good song, needs work.
2.5 of 5
Funny tune.
I liked very much the "sounds" you introduced at 1:00 and once more around 3:20
Maybe the main theme is not too "original" but the song is well composed and it develops well.
Domenico
PS: I find your title very inspiring: here where I live we don't see the sun very often...
Hmm sounds like some of the instrumentation is off. Mainly the early drums. There skipping or there either not quantized. Feels a little inconsistent at times as well, would sound loads better if it was mastered up. Some of the transitions don't make sense either. The attempt is nice, but take it slow. especially with such a long track like this you don't wanna rush it. Has great potential though. keep it up! peace
hell yeah, there are definitely some parts of this that kill, wish i had equipment i'd as kto do a remix.. ahhhh, until then my friend, love the arpeggiated guitar & the shimmer/drums pattern that goes with it. wicked.
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I can send you the presets
What presets do you want?
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But now that is fixed
Also thanks for your comment, really well appreciated
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That being said, I also hear a lot of potential ideas and encourage you to continue working on this to have fuller more in the background sounds (I am not a producer so I am not sure how to describe the sound I am thinking of). Everything just sounds so upfront, rather than layers of elements.
This progressed very nicely, getting more indepth as I listened. The orchestra keyboard sound was a bit hokey for me.
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you know i also used this loop made by J2age .
and it's real funny how members used the loops made by members in a different way .
lol....
i will upload this track made by me feat J2age tomorrow on looperman ..
i uploaded it on soundcloud and you can listen it here
http://soundcloud.com/hartog-robert/dj-the-observer-ft-j2age-who.
your track is real banging !
greetzz
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i like your track!
love the melody and pianoparts ....
and also real great vocals !
is tiina a member from looperman ?
it is a real hot track !
good job , mate !
greetzzz from The Netherlands !
no Tiina is not a member from looperman but you can find the acapella in soundcloud!
And again thanks
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What I Liked:
Dubstep had good wobbles
lyrics were potentially energetic and provocative
had a decent hook
drums were tight
What I think needs work:
you have too dry of vocals, no reverb or echo, or gates.
You need Multi tracks to answer yourself in "Who, -WHO, Gonna Stope me" Lyric. additionally you'd want to put that in the back a bit so it gives it more "Space"
It was hard to hear clearly the pronunciation of the fast rap lyrics
the rapping wasn't "in time" with the beat.
the Dubstep had too much going on crashing into one another, you would probably want to aim for the listener to catch up with you.
That's my advice, take it or leave it. potentially good song, needs work.
2.5 of 5
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I liked very much the "sounds" you introduced at 1:00 and once more around 3:20
Maybe the main theme is not too "original" but the song is well composed and it develops well.
Domenico
PS: I find your title very inspiring: here where I live we don't see the sun very often...
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Sure, the mix could be better, but so could the world :-)
Good job.
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Ciao, Domenico
PS: I disagree with the bass guitar playing only in the bridge, but then I am bass player so my opinion is biased :-)
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