Decent first effort my friend. I would suggest that you have a look at the sound levels of the vocals and the beat, because they came over way too loud and distorted at times.
I feel you could do well with adding some melody over the beats and maybe variate them, so that the track doesn't end so abruptly.
Like I said though my friend, a decent first effort. Keep listening and learning!
I'd take care of that 300Hz area in that vocal track as it distorts and it shouldn't. This kind of vocals work great with less low end.
One of those kicks is distorting as well and there is a random click tacking place that doesn't sound to pleasant. I'd take care of those issues first.
I do feel there is room for improvisation here as some chords would have worked great on top of that beat!
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I feel you could do well with adding some melody over the beats and maybe variate them, so that the track doesn't end so abruptly.
Like I said though my friend, a decent first effort. Keep listening and learning!
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One of those kicks is distorting as well and there is a random click tacking place that doesn't sound to pleasant. I'd take care of those issues first.
I do feel there is room for improvisation here as some chords would have worked great on top of that beat!
Cheers!