I just noticed your reply! Well if that nasal quality is a result of a cold or flu then you shouldn't take any medication! Lol! It's what makes your voice recognizable and it's a rare quality (Amy Whinehouse, Adele, Joss Stone etc.) they all have that element that instantly makes you recognize them and you've definitely got it. Keep on doing music. Best wishes!
Wow Bonnie, like Ed, I can definitely hear an Adele-esq quality to your voice. I love minor chords, and piano, and things that are stripped down and "unplugged." There is room for strings, drums, etc. but this also stands well on its own.
I am a huge fan of your vocals though. You are a wonderful addition to the Loop. I love the fact that you aren't satisfied with this one. That type of attitude will take you a long way in this business. Keep posting the hits. I hope all is well.
I so appreciate your continued interest and feedback on my work Bear :) I've been in a big rut for a few months, but there's something about the loop community that really has ignited my drive to challenge myself.
Cheers!
Nice, totally enjoyed it. Loved the vocals and lyrics. You are quite talented and look forward to hearing more! Gonna dl this so just wanna say thanks for sharing!
Very very good once again! You definitely need a producer and a demo. A bit of work on the arrangement could be needed to better emphasize the structure of the song and make it unpredictable. There is definitely a great amount of potential here and you are obviously very versatile with your voice, I've mentioned before that you have some nasal quality about your voice which makes it recognizable and it can really set you apart from other voices and that is extremely rare.
From a production point of view the song could use some building up structure wise and definitely needs some strings, you can easily build it up into a powerful song with a great, wide and emotional ending with a bit of production work.
This was recorded as I was on the tail end of the flu (same with I'll Be Waiting) but if you heard the nasal in all my tracks... then I guess that is just how I sing :P
I really like the idea of this track, but like I said it needs work. My voice doesn't have the fire the lyrics deserve and it's definitely due to the lack of structure! Still a work in progress so I'm anxious to hear what becomes of it :)
Thank you for the feedback!
Positive attitude evokes more positivity, so never compare your talents to others. See what you have to offer and build upon that. I still feel I need improvement in my writing, but then again aren't we always learning and growing? Thank you for your kind words! :)
UR voice IS AMAZING O_O i cant stop listing to this song ITS GOOD =D thanks for making it downloadable =) and check out my new track Journey hope you like it =)...Man this is good i really cant stop hitting play to hear it again XD AD out.
Thank you for your continued support :) I really need to redo the vocals cause there are pitch and timing issues, but once again this was my rough take just to get the idea out so someone could help me get the production right. Glad you enjoyed it!
p.s. Well done on Journey!! Let's your mind wander...
Thank you and i know how you feel bout giving hard work away for free lol i was like tht when i first started but eventually i just made all my work downloadable XD check my tracks out when you get time u might find something you like =D
It's not so much about giving it away for free, but rather giving access to unpolished work. (I'm a perfectionist and I could easily pick apart every track I've uploaded thus far :P) But then again, there's something very powerful about the raw emotion given at any particular moment.
I'll definitely take a look, and thanks again :)
As I was listening to that intro I was thinking...This is as close as I have heard any vocalist come to sounding like Adele...I hadn`t caught that listening to your other tracks...and have you noticed that a lot of Adele`s other music is really basic piano, bass & drums type accompaniment...anyway..must say you are off to one very fine start...If its not quite finished yet I`ll look forward to the final...Ed
Well that's a great compliment :) She's definitely got a unique sound! And yes, this is only the beginning, looking forward to expressing it various ways. Thank you for your thoughts!
Cheers!
away from the fact that your voice is amazing, I actually like the Instrumental, maybe a bit basic but good oO
the only thing I wonder is whats with that background sound like someones opening a can of lemonade or somethin'...
meh, doesn't matter.
thumbs up for this great, even thought WIP, track!
Haha! You caught me! My office doesn't have a door and with my condenser mic... I pick up everything in my household... including people at the other end of the house opening a can!! When listening back to it I had to laugh cause it reminded me of cocking a gun. This is just rough and I plan to change vocals according to various instrumental builds, so I kept it for the irony ;) Good ear!
This is Amazing =D its soothing and clear ur voice is amazing no doubt bout that, the beat to me is not missing anything and it sounds like u try to do a fusion between jazz and pop and i say it works well together =) thanks for the amazing upload to bad its not downloadable =P but i shall bookmark the page so i can always hear it when ever i need a soothing song to clear my mind. Have a good day AD out.
If you enjoyed it that much, I shall lift the block for you ;)
I usually don't hand out rough work... but I guess thats kind of the point of LM!
Thank you for your kind words!
Wow! Your minor gives a major smile! I really like this. Bonnie, this is great, I can see what slowed you down. Choices I hear from this. Excellent start. Thanks for allowing us to hear. I'm sure it will come along really good with these good loopers around. Keep at it B. Peace.
It does leave quite the creative freedom to explore musical directions eh? Like I said in the lyrics section, I can't take full credit for this track. A friend wrote it, and I was inspired to build upon it. I'm really excited to explore loopers vision with this piece! Oh remixes are exciting! :P
Now this is a can do attitude! Really wish more of our fellow human beings could have this outlook on life. That being said, excellent song. Again your voice really knows its way around the instruments. Keep this up girl, high five!
Wow, is a pretty good word to describe how I feel about your voice. I think you've managed to capture the essence of these lyrics beautifully. Such a haunting song this is, your voice is like the prefect vessel. Really great job, I'll be looking forward to hearing more of your music.
My kidy is sleepin now, so mother and I was the lucky to enjoy your artwork, in spite of it's not ready... if I understood well...maybe, cos the drummer went to the kitchen... :-)
tomorrow I will write a new comment when everybody here heard your awesome voice and MUSIC :-)
Thanx for the upload, take care of the world... :-)
Danke
Yeah.. anything that's a work in progress I don't allow downloads, but thoughts and ideas are always appreciated :) It's definitely missing the drums, but I'm so stuck on where to take this I was just getting flustered at all attempts... And I'm not above asking for help :P
Much love to you and your family Danke!
You know, if this was a baseball game, you would be batting 1000!
Another great song, one that is radio ready and current enough to be heard on radio stations all over this land. You seriously have some remarkable vocal chops.
Like Malu I am a huge fan of your work, and I look forward to your next posting.
Until then, oh oh oh oh oh, you are so so so so good. Hope all is well.
Haha thank you-ooh-ooh-ooh-ooh! I've got a variety I could post, but I feel from here on out I should utilize this site for creating with members. I posted these few to show versatility, but I have so many ideas that I'm just sitting on because I'm not 100% with my production... mainly percussion.
I'm humbled by the wonderful comments received thus far and it's truly helping my confidence to stick to the grind! Thank you for taking an interest in my creations :)
When that voice sings the pace, the breeze, of the moon reflecting off the deep blue. The green, natural in form and beauty. While listening to the music complimenting the voice and the birds in the trees on the block I have to agree that positive thinking is the source for healthy energy. You did a great job with this track. Thanks for sharing, your good you.
When it's all said and done it comes down to realness in the end and I'm finding a lot of that here,a refreshing break from the façade and ego overload too often engaged in contemporary music,very well recorded with a superb mix and natural timbre throughout....excellent work!
cheers Dave
It's true, mainstream music seems to be over saturated with ego and garbage lately... ain't nobody got time for that! Thank you for your thoughts Dave!
Cheers!
Ooh haven't heard of taxi.com, will check it out thanx :)
Cranberries influence is a definitely probability! I still have my Cranberries cassettes!
Yes it is very catchy eh!? With all the oh oh's lol. I should count how many times I do that in this track... well it is pop and pop tends to be very repetitive. Normally I'd be against it, but I felt it really helped get the message across to just LET GO of all your worries :) ...ps just counted and I believe I say 'oh' 90 times! bahaha wow...
OMG !!! I love your grain of voice which makes your song so expressive and emotional ... !
A little jewel of a song, thanks a lot !
Compliments,
Janis ;))
Thank you Malu! I've got a tone of different styles of tracks I've been testing out. Loads of fun!! Can't wait till I have some spare time to lay down a few ideas I've got and get some looper collaborations done! I appreciate your continued kind words!
Cheers!
we have national celebration that's why Esther, you know the 7 years old girly is up and dancin 4th time in a row for this song. I'm smilin cause this is pure talent what I hear. I like your voice, the groovy song, thanx to the pumpy bassline and for the stepy drum.
Awesome MUSIC
Thanx Bunnie, our small family love you
DL,Cheers, Danke
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I am a huge fan of your vocals though. You are a wonderful addition to the Loop. I love the fact that you aren't satisfied with this one. That type of attitude will take you a long way in this business. Keep posting the hits. I hope all is well.
Bear
Cheers!
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Wayne
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Bunnie
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From a production point of view the song could use some building up structure wise and definitely needs some strings, you can easily build it up into a powerful song with a great, wide and emotional ending with a bit of production work.
Fabulous voice!
-Malu-
I really like the idea of this track, but like I said it needs work. My voice doesn't have the fire the lyrics deserve and it's definitely due to the lack of structure! Still a work in progress so I'm anxious to hear what becomes of it :)
Thank you for the feedback!
Cheers!
Bunnie
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Bunnie
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p.s. Well done on Journey!! Let's your mind wander...
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Bunnie
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I'll definitely take a look, and thanks again :)
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Bunnie
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the only thing I wonder is whats with that background sound like someones opening a can of lemonade or somethin'...
meh, doesn't matter.
thumbs up for this great, even thought WIP, track!
Cheers!
Bunnie
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I usually don't hand out rough work... but I guess thats kind of the point of LM!
Thank you for your kind words!
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Bunnie
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Bunnie
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Bonnie
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My kidy is sleepin now, so mother and I was the lucky to enjoy your artwork, in spite of it's not ready... if I understood well...maybe, cos the drummer went to the kitchen... :-)
tomorrow I will write a new comment when everybody here heard your awesome voice and MUSIC :-)
Thanx for the upload, take care of the world... :-)
Danke
Much love to you and your family Danke!
Cheers!
Bonnie
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Another great song, one that is radio ready and current enough to be heard on radio stations all over this land. You seriously have some remarkable vocal chops.
Like Malu I am a huge fan of your work, and I look forward to your next posting.
Until then, oh oh oh oh oh, you are so so so so good. Hope all is well.
Bear
I'm humbled by the wonderful comments received thus far and it's truly helping my confidence to stick to the grind! Thank you for taking an interest in my creations :)
Cheers!
Bonnie
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cheers Dave
Cheers!
Bonnie
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I totally love the lyrics, I see lots, especially when my thoughts change for the better or the worse, things happen accordingly.. I'm awed lol
catchy as heck, great lyrics... do i hear a little Cranberries influence in the vocal waivering ? meh, not that any of that really matters right ?
Top notch,
Neal
Cranberries influence is a definitely probability! I still have my Cranberries cassettes!
Yes it is very catchy eh!? With all the oh oh's lol. I should count how many times I do that in this track... well it is pop and pop tends to be very repetitive. Normally I'd be against it, but I felt it really helped get the message across to just LET GO of all your worries :) ...ps just counted and I believe I say 'oh' 90 times! bahaha wow...
Thanks for the feedback Trip-Nip!
Cheers!
Bonnie
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This is another pop gem from you!
You have a very interesting voice. Looking forward to hear more.
Ciao, Domenico
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A little jewel of a song, thanks a lot !
Compliments,
Janis ;))
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A smile can be worth a 1000 thank you's
Yet society seems to have forgot that we're all family.!
Great vocals,beautiful guitar and a beautiful message you convey!
keep up the great song producing as your messages are being felt even in uk............great work girly!
your a star and a new generation of hope,if more would think like you!.
Life love n unity to you and your loved ones
Thank you for the support!
Cheers!
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This song is very uplifting and I believe your message comes across really well. Great work once again! Faved! Became a fan of your work!
-Malu-
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Awesome MUSIC
Thanx Bunnie, our small family love you
DL,Cheers, Danke
Cheers!