Love this so far. If I were remixing it I would like to add more subtle guitar (Wah) sounds (Think Sade) and maybe an atomspheric pad coming in and out in the chourus. I also like to add some subtle white noise effects as well (a la Brian Eno) but that is more personal taste and my own personal style on my tunes than what you may need to do on this song I totally agree with midisparks that it needs a bit more percussion to build the tune, but otherwise well done, your on your way with a good track.
i liked the groove a lot. at the end I thought I heard an organ note. seems like at the point you break off the song might want to come down a bit - you know - lighten up the groove and have an extended chill organ solo or something, then build it up again (maybe with some bongos or something jammin with the organ), and back with a reprise of the lyrics for an ending. good luck!
on Am I Dreaming Ft RaRCharm by MrGene
on Am I Dreaming Ft RaRCharm by MrGene
on Am I Dreaming Ft RaRCharm by MrGene
Mr. Gene
on Am I Dreaming Ft RaRCharm by MrGene
I did cut the track off, I need more lyrics to continue. Man, I am just getting started on this one. I will take your advise and add more to it.
Thanks,
Mr. Gene