I havent been active for a century and I thought I should review something here, so I clicked on the first featured track. I must say I am gald I did ... pretty nice work you have here. The singing I must say is pretty good and you have talent in writing lyrics, something I havent attempted to do so I cannot criticise it, lol ... Now the structure is good, well if you have singing you have to work on getting your patterns to wrap themselves around it well, and you did a good job at that. The bassline is pretty good and the percussion is very good! the synths sound pretty good ... any vsts used? now for the criticising, hmmm ... not much but the first thing that comes to mind is the production. the bass and some of the other mid range elements like some part of the percussion could have been EQ'ed a bit better, there is a little clash, but it isnt very audible ... The loop you used doesnt have a strong kick, which I would've loved to hear in this track ... maybe you didnt want one, but anyway ... also you could have put in some a lead to go with the beautiful vocals, that would have made this one a killer. Also the percussions in the break 2:50 I think sound good, but, there isnt enough variation i the percussion at this stage, but I guess this about as far as you can get using a loop based program like Acid pro, I know people would disagree, but I like fl studio instead because it gives you the option of
Hehe I couldn't dare change programs right now (only because I am finally becoming familiar enough to deal with THIS program). I really really appreciate the critique though, it helps me to know what people like (and what they feel is missing from tracks). Thanks for listening!
Thanks very much for the critique, I appreciate it. If I still had the original pieces I'd give it a boost... shame I lost it in a crash. Thanks for listening :-)
Sweet tune! That kick drum sound is realllllllly nice. Very 80s synthpop style. Very nice, and your vocals are blondie-like. Congrats, Im a satisfied listener!
fuurreesshhh!!! simply fresh!
the only problem is your vocals. You usually put your vocals together veery well. What happened here? They seem foggy and low volumed compared to the beat. There were times when i couldnt hear what you were saying, but other than that it was real good. keep it up.
Welllll that would be my evil little experimental side that likes to twist my vocals lol. I had a flanger on it and I was scared of having my voice too loud (I still don't like the sound of it lol) Thanks for listening, glad you liked it :-)
mello as fuck. im smoking a fat as blunt to this one..hahaha. im telling you, your voice is crazy!! it goes so fresh with your beats. What you need tho, is a string or some kinda little extra sound playing when you go high pitched, it'll really even everything up.
LMAO @ mello as fuck! Thanks for listening, I'm glad you liked this... I am still learning what's too much in adding effects, always afraid I'll clutter it. Thanks for the idea, I'll keep that in mind when I'm doing tracks like this. :-)
Thanks very much, this is so far my favorite track I've done... funny cause it seems to be the least favorite of anyone else who's heard my stuff LOL. Thanks for listening!
You know... a band was on the wish list til I met my fiance.. now just getting him here for good is my main goal ;-) Thanks for listening, glad you liked it!
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i can here the words but mis the power.
good singing though.
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the only problem is your vocals. You usually put your vocals together veery well. What happened here? They seem foggy and low volumed compared to the beat. There were times when i couldnt hear what you were saying, but other than that it was real good. keep it up.
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Im with mrrobot on this. i love your voice..haha it goes perfect with the beat. really nice job for a first track.
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THANKS FOR OUR REVIEW,
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Keep on your work!
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many , many many thanks for your reviews
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great arragement , my fav.
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have you sung?