makako

nice loop. i would say its more techno than deep house

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This has shitloads of potential to be a stunning track, but it'll take a lot of work!! That bassline is awsome...just needs more depth and some more percussion in there. The intro is a bit too long..I skipped forwards after a while coz i wanted to hear what else was in there. But like i said that bassline is great, and original too. I have faved it so i can keep up with your updates!!

Well, here's my review, I think you waited too much in the intro (first 2 mins). Try to make it shorter or add more elements. The bubble like sounds are hot:) After the 2 mins, I think I could appreciate the idea of you want to do (the bass/melody) but I didn't feel enough energy from it, I think it needs some kind of boost like some fx or distortion. I think you should focus on "enhancing" the bass/melody to make it more powerful. Also you could try adding sweeps to make transitions more interesting, like for example around 2:17 :)
-Ryck

I love the snare drum how did you make it sound so clear but with a kinda reveerb.

This would be a great rap beat or just a cool chill song with a bit of work, not much work though, its real good man.

hell yeah it is rap and a real good one man, u had this totally worked out, sounds fuckin nice, really
peace
mouko