JohnnieSmoke

Thank you, for the comment. The riff is good, something else is needed, maybe I need to drop something out and bring it back, or bring in "jumping to the top of the word, to the top of the world, to the top of the world" right off the bat. It could for sure use some fine tuning, I think it has a lot of potential. Maybe it just needs an epic video.

I understand what you're getting at, maybe I just need to structure the lyrical content a bit more. Maybe it just needs an epic video.

I think you will love this, it's not music, it's musical but it's an audio show.
You are in for a great surpirse, I have been sitting on it for three years, all the pieces finally came together for part one to be finalized.

Listen to T.S.a.A - Blackjack Episode One -The Blue Glow Part One - Claiming The Universe - Dwelling by Johnnie Smoke on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/XWdt4

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