you need to add a crash or a few whooshes at the bits where something new happens. this is not psy trance as such its progressive uplifting/melodic trance this could be 10x better if you added more synths some chords and basically unleash the melodical potential of this song. the structure of the song is fine and the build ups are simple but effective. you really need to add more synths :)
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