I think this sounds really good, but I know nothing about house music so I'm not one to ask about the commercial sound aspect. I do know I liked it, and it had my head bouncing to the beat...and that's about as close as this old guy gets to dancing, haha. So, from my standpoint this is a success. I'm sure some others will give you much better ideas on what to add/improve. I liked it a lot. In the end, that is all any of us can ask from a listener. Well done.
Thanks my friend! I'm happy you liked it. Hopefully someone can help with the commercial bit. Making commercial tracks seems to be so easy yet so hard. Perhaps commercial sounds are not as easy as I once thought it was. Thanks for your two cents and have wonderful day!
Honestly the only thing I didnt care for was the bridge only because it just sounded out of time but thats niether here no there. This track has nice bass and a really solid melody. Love It ! Can definitely be a club song for sure. Every track you put out is good man! Nice job on this one. H
I can hear what you're hearing. The thing is, it came in on time but the cutoff was so low, you couldn't hear it. Which made it sound off beat. I will fix that in a bit. Thanks for the comments and always stopping by, take care!
Thanks Analog! I stopped the glitch vocals only because it didn't fit in after the drop came in. I wanted to keep it in the entire song too, but it just didn't fit in with the sounds after the drop.
Wow, sounds nice man. It's close to commercial quality, just needs a few things fleshed out mixing-wise, but it sounds actually pretty decent right now as is!
Thanks Epic! Glad you enjoyed this. I'm happy you think this is close to commercial quality, since that is what I'm aiming for. Thanks for listening in and take care!
Sounds mighty fine to me, maybe some slight variation would have added. I would definitely give it a play on my Belter Radio Sunday night dance show if ok with you.
Thanks for a super track.
Best wishes,
Mark
Thanks my friend! You can most definitely play this on your show. Also thanks for the tips on the variation part, will keep that in mind. Thanks for always stopping by, have a great day!
Now that sounds brilliant. This should be in a night club, good beat and had me dancing (if you can class swinging on your chair as dancing?) - Moving on, I don't often listen to this genre, but to me this sounds like a solid track with a good melody, good beat and overall quality sound. Nice!
Thanks man! Glad you enjoyed this one. Swinging on the chair is definitely considered dancing to me, other wise I wouldn't be considered a great dancer lol. Thanks for stopping by and hope all is well!
nice one! made a few tracks in this type of progressive myself too. everything is just fine, only the beat it`s really boring. with a little percussion in the background and some variation with kick, snare, hat combo would be a good refreshing track! Cheers! :)
Thanks Analog! I think you're right when you say the beat is a bit boring. I'm working on a better version of this, so hopefully it will sound better when I'm done. Thanks for the tips and glad you enjoyed it. Take care!
good introduction, this melody reminds me of a song(not remember the name now) well known.
this piano is perfect,
liked the featured that you gave to bass get very good
very good job friend.
Monday,I will do upload my new track, I would love that you listen and let your feedbak on it.
Thanks man! I'm happy you enjoyed this little piece. I think I know what song you're talking about. Is it "Scream N Shout by Britney Spears and Will I am"? That song's melody does sound very similar to my song.
I'll check out your new song when I get a chance. As always thanks for stopping and take care!
Lovely Track! And i second that Larry! Better mix will take this track to a whole new level... Also I just think a lot could've been done in the rhythm part in terms of clap samples or -interesting Hi-hats... Your bass-line is kick-ass and i feel the rhythm is somewhere not doing justice to it... The lead came as a good surprise at 4:20.. Nice variation that was... and loved the ending too. That Nexus piano sample needed little processing though.. but overall.. A Wonderful track!
Looking forward to hear some more interesting music from you.
Thanks Ether! You made a great point about making the rhythm parts more dynamic. Adding more dynamics to the drums will probably boost this track to a higher level. Right now, I think I only used three hihat samples and a basic clap rhythm, so these tips are making me think.
I'm happy you enjoyed this track, and I'm looking forward to hearing from you some more in the future, till then take care and thanks for the kind words!
Simple but effective. I love the sounds you've used. It's kind of Deadmau5 vs Jimmy van m. A lot of tracks i play have me turning the volume down but this one says "crank me up" Absolutely love it and i'm going to download it so i can hear it again.
Cheers for that!
FR
I can hear what you're saying with that Jimmy van and deadmau5 style. Most of my progressive house tracks usually combines artist styles, such as the ones you're pointing out, and turns it into it's own style. So good ear on that one!
Thanks for taking the time to review and comment, happy you enjoyed this one!
I like how this is laid out. The intro is a bit plain, but that's about the only thing that was a bit off for me. Everything else is nice, creative, and displays interesting intrumentation. Everything seems to flow great with each other. At 4:20, that one synth adds alot. Very unexpecting and simple. Very nice and simple outro as well. I am glad I listened to this. I'd like to work with you, my friend. If you're interested, you can message me. Until then, take care!
I was waiting for someone to comment on the synth on 4:20. At first I wasn't even going to bring it in, but decided to give it a shot. It still sounds a little weird to me, but I'm starting to get used to it. Hope most listening won't dislike it to much but then again, you can't please everyone.
We definitely can collaborate on something! Send me an email at magic41151@yaoo.com, when you're ready to start. Till then take care and have a nice day!
I am liking this a lot and I think you have the makings of a real great track here. For me ( and only my humble opinion) it is a bit flat at the moment, intro could be a bit be a bit mort lively, there needs to be a few more changes and to create a bit more balance... beat and bass increase to would really lift it to a new level... but I have this sound going round now in my head and would love to help if you wanted. Sorry if that sounded negative but it wasn't meant to be because this is a fantastic track that could even be better! great work.
Very best wishes,
Mark
I agree with you! This track can be a whole lot better, which is why I post them here. Constructive criticism and collaborations from great artist such as your self, is the reason why I come to looperman. Not only does it help me improve drastically, but we also might get a good track out of it.
Send an email to magic41151@yahoo.com and we can collaborate on this little track :)! Till then, take care and thanks for the help!
Well done! Unfortunately I don`t have any comments, cuz everyone mentioned everything! Only that rhytmic section can be more softer breakbeat style, that 4/4 beats not really work out for me in this case, but anyway well produced! Cheers!
Thanks Analog! Sorry for the late reply, just now seeing your comment. I agree the drum beats could have been done better, maybe later I will try changing it. Thanks for stopping by, take care! :)
Man you can't see me but there is a big smile on my face right now. All this inspired by a mouse, just brilliant!
Pets are important family members too. And they don't judge either! Nice piano work here and an upbeat track altogether. I hope the little wee mouse loves it too!
Faved! - Billy
Thanks mate! Glad you enjoyed this one! I couldn't agree with you more, pets are definitely important family members! Sometimes they are better listeners too! Thanks for stopping by, take care!
Really nice intro with the piano and the bass. I wasn't expecting the beat to be so pumping in a chill out tune but it works really well. The harmonies are great. The synth that comes in towards the end of the track is nice as well.
Really enjoyed listening to this tune.
FR
Thanks FR! The synth was actually going to be taken out because it didn't sound right when I was working on it. I'm glad, I left it in there because after listening to it for a bit I realized it works perfectly. Thanks for stopping by, take care!
Thank you Orlando! I'm happy you enjoyed this track! Also happy this track lives up to your expectations, that makes me very happy! Thanks for stopping by, have a good day!
I absolutely love how you made this song from a mouse. The song tells a story which fits perfectly with what you've told us in the description. It has a simplistic sound, but also is bouncy and fun to listen to. Your motivation levels are very high. I'm glad I was able to listen to this. Your piano patterns were executed beautifully. As if the piano resembled the mouse, perhaps? Nevertheless, nice track!
Thanks Golden! I'm happy you felt that way. Also glad this track fits the description. When everyone can feel the same feelings you felt when listening to one of your tracks then you know you did your job right! Thanks for the kind words and have a great day :)!
This is so wonderful. I want to say "playful" meets "joy." Does that even make sense? Also, I'm glad you guys kept the mouse as a pet! Wonderful job with this one!
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I hope all is well.
Bear
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Thanks for always checking in, take care!
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Thanks for a super track.
Best wishes,
Mark
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- JAweGuy
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this piano is perfect,
liked the featured that you gave to bass get very good
very good job friend.
Monday,I will do upload my new track, I would love that you listen and let your feedbak on it.
I'll check out your new song when I get a chance. As always thanks for stopping and take care!
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a better mood for my time .
i really enjoyed your tune .
:)
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Looking forward to hear some more interesting music from you.
EB
I'm happy you enjoyed this track, and I'm looking forward to hearing from you some more in the future, till then take care and thanks for the kind words!
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Cheers for that!
FR
Thanks for taking the time to review and comment, happy you enjoyed this one!
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~Eighteen
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~Ookami
I was waiting for someone to comment on the synth on 4:20. At first I wasn't even going to bring it in, but decided to give it a shot. It still sounds a little weird to me, but I'm starting to get used to it. Hope most listening won't dislike it to much but then again, you can't please everyone.
We definitely can collaborate on something! Send me an email at magic41151@yaoo.com, when you're ready to start. Till then take care and have a nice day!
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I am liking this a lot and I think you have the makings of a real great track here. For me ( and only my humble opinion) it is a bit flat at the moment, intro could be a bit be a bit mort lively, there needs to be a few more changes and to create a bit more balance... beat and bass increase to would really lift it to a new level... but I have this sound going round now in my head and would love to help if you wanted. Sorry if that sounded negative but it wasn't meant to be because this is a fantastic track that could even be better! great work.
Very best wishes,
Mark
Send an email to magic41151@yahoo.com and we can collaborate on this little track :)! Till then, take care and thanks for the help!
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Pets are important family members too. And they don't judge either! Nice piano work here and an upbeat track altogether. I hope the little wee mouse loves it too!
Faved! - Billy
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Really enjoyed listening to this tune.
FR
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Compliments______Orlando
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~Ookami
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