Modnex

That melody in background sounds beautiful with all those lazers and wobbles. Nice job here!

Haven't seen you for a while here, and this is nice comeback song :) As your other songs, this sounds fresh and uplifting. Keep it up ;)

Beautiful stuff. Ive always loved EDM and this is part of why haha

I'm new to electronic music (EDM, Dub, etc.), not even sure yet in the differences between the genres, but I'm liking the vibe on this track. Great payoff with the synths whipping in and out 3/4 of the way through. Nicely done composition!

Very cool start to this track and I like the melody but it def needs more variety in sounds all the way up to the drop.. Drop is cool also needs some work , to me it sounds very all over the place. As you said this is only your demo, I think once ou are done it will sund great ! Can't wait to hear it.

Beautifully pleasant and enjoyable track. Nice job! The piano is sweet. I like the intro, break in the middle and ending, as it all seems to tell a captivating story. Amazing how you said that you made this while being bored. It sometimes seems that we can make our best pieces during times like these. Well done!

Loving what you have so far. Really looking forward to the full and final release man! Do it justice! :) Great idea for dubstep remix. Cheers, comrade!

~GO

This is a really nice track!

Love the break down at 1:46, definitely an interesting track, can agree about the repetitive sound that starts around :28 needing mixed up a bit, it sounds good but being so short its hard to hear it over and over, maybe even just it being lower in the mix would help, or fading slowly before the drop so you get 4 or 8 bars without it, either way good track and looking forward to hearing the longer version

i like that use of white noise (i think) going into 0:40 secs in your build-up. from 1:48 on it is great dub stuff. nice work! I felt from about 0:57 to 1:40 I got a bit tired of the repetition of the one motive. nice work!

Yes man, dance music. I like man.

cool and energic .

Hey, this sounds pretty cool. Not exactly my favorite style of music, but I can still appreciate it. I liked it quite a bit soon after the break especially. I think the intro sounded a little cramped and messy. By that, I mean the vocalish sound and the lead synth were really fighting for space and interfering with each other. They seemed a bit out of time as well. Mostly throughout, everything besides the high hats and that little drum hit in the left seemed to be flowing at me right from the center. A bit more planned separation might help. I thought that this was a cool theme though, and enjoyed listening!

around 1:17 add a better drop. stop the music and bring in the big bass for a little bit to make it more commercial. Also this song would be very easy to solo que some vocals. Im sure some of the people on here would love for you to use them in this song! Great job tho bro!

You've outdone yourself my friend! I really enjoy this! The intro is capturing, and from there it takes off! At 1:32, it get's going hardcore. The synths you use are very precise and were absolutely in your control. Especially in terms of volume. Nice and steady drum patterns. Amazing job, man. Take my fav!

~GO

very nice intro really caught my attention which is always good :)
If it was me making the track i would have used the 'ahh' sounds from the start and maybe used them throughout the song, with some reverb and delay, so they have even more of a purpose, but thats just an idea i had while listening.
Great track :)

Respect,

Xyilent

i like your writing. a lot going on and all well mixed. not easy. you achieve a very spacy feeling which would work well in a club i think. it would be interesting to have a section exclusively devoted to the kick and some other percussion. Would be great base for a build. just a thought for future works. all the best! Dan

Nice track. I like the vocals in the beginning.

Yo Yo !
This a very good and nice clubby dancetrack .
It has a lot of varous styles in it .
I love the drop after 0,31 , that realy kicks ass (lol)You bring it back several times , Got to be more !!
LoL(just joking)
Im not that trancy , but its very nice !

Very good job !

I think to make this one massive you need some low end bass frequency drops that expand the frequency zone.
IMHO (I liked it)
Cru

Great bass, great track.

FAVED 4 SURE!

I have no feedback whatsoever because everything is great!

-R.P.S

I think this sounds really good, but I know nothing about house music so I'm not one to ask about the commercial sound aspect. I do know I liked it, and it had my head bouncing to the beat...and that's about as close as this old guy gets to dancing, haha. So, from my standpoint this is a success. I'm sure some others will give you much better ideas on what to add/improve. I liked it a lot. In the end, that is all any of us can ask from a listener. Well done.

I hope all is well.

Bear

Honestly the only thing I didnt care for was the bridge only because it just sounded out of time but thats niether here no there. This track has nice bass and a really solid melody. Love It ! Can definitely be a club song for sure. Every track you put out is good man! Nice job on this one. H

nice club sounds! Only why are you stopped that vocal glitch what goes from the beginning? It was nice... anyway nice track! Cheers!

Wow, sounds nice man. It's close to commercial quality, just needs a few things fleshed out mixing-wise, but it sounds actually pretty decent right now as is!