Hi there, I have written some lyrics to go with your great track , I used the version by songmaker2448, hope you like them .
Second chance
10 sec intro
Strolling on a moonlit beach …hand in hand
Leaving our footprints there in … wet sand
Cosy evenings by the fire
Just so happy to be with her
Life couldn’t be any better than this
The warmth of her smile , her tender kiss
So what was I thinking on the night ….that I went astray
No excuse lost my head now I gotta pay
I have no right to ask I killed a sweet romance
But will she ever find a way to give me a second chance.
1: 14
We always said our love would last forever and a day
Then I tore it apart, broke her heart, blew it all away
The choices we make, chances we take, all come at a cost
And if you get it wrong, won’t be very long,
You’ll be counting what you’ve lost.
1: 46
I hope and I pray, there will come a day
When we’re together again,
But if you want the rainbow you gotta deal with the rain
I messed up big time , on that blurry, regretful night
And just saying sorry is never going to put things right.
break 2:17 to 2:26
I have no right to ask I killed a sweet romance
But now will I ever get that second chance.
Nice! Remarkably different from mine, I am impressed with how 2 people can take a tune and come up with such creative ideas! Way to go! I like it! You're good! Did you get my other message?
Thank you!
Actually, I am just a very young adult with a gift for writing lyrics. So I am trying to create tunes for my songs. In about 5-10 years, I plan to form my own band (I don't sing or play any instruments except the drums) to play my songs. I am in love with Pop rock music. How can I improve my tunes?
I would appreciate some tips and maybe even collaboration.
What kind of pop do you want me to upload? I am into Selena Gomez/Taylor Swift style Pop.
Oh wow! this is such a sweeetttt! little ditty here so filled with a plethora of sweet joy and loveliness very Mellifluous indeed & very much enjoyed by me, what a wonderful starter for my day ahead thanks for sharing this little piece of heaven. :) Bravo!
Hey 1992g, added a couple of guitar tracks to your Second Chance, just for fun. If it's okay I'll upload it on my page crediting you and you can check it out, if you don't like it I can delete it....just having some fun playing around...if you would rather I didn't that's cool to I understand...
Really nice track, stylish and well done...don't know if you want anything added to it or not but thought I might download it and play around with it...add a little guitar lead, just what I hear in my head.... I'm old school, play most of my instruments...haven't explored AI as yet, but I can see the potential...good work
on Second Chance by 1992g
on Second Chance by 1992g
on Second Chance by 1992g
Second chance
10 sec intro
Strolling on a moonlit beach …hand in hand
Leaving our footprints there in … wet sand
Cosy evenings by the fire
Just so happy to be with her
Life couldn’t be any better than this
The warmth of her smile , her tender kiss
So what was I thinking on the night ….that I went astray
No excuse lost my head now I gotta pay
I have no right to ask I killed a sweet romance
But will she ever find a way to give me a second chance.
1: 14
We always said our love would last forever and a day
Then I tore it apart, broke her heart, blew it all away
The choices we make, chances we take, all come at a cost
And if you get it wrong, won’t be very long,
You’ll be counting what you’ve lost.
1: 46
I hope and I pray, there will come a day
When we’re together again,
But if you want the rainbow you gotta deal with the rain
I messed up big time , on that blurry, regretful night
And just saying sorry is never going to put things right.
break 2:17 to 2:26
I have no right to ask I killed a sweet romance
But now will I ever get that second chance.
on Phoenix by 1992g
on Second Chance by 1992g
Actually, I am just a very young adult with a gift for writing lyrics. So I am trying to create tunes for my songs. In about 5-10 years, I plan to form my own band (I don't sing or play any instruments except the drums) to play my songs. I am in love with Pop rock music. How can I improve my tunes?
I would appreciate some tips and maybe even collaboration.
What kind of pop do you want me to upload? I am into Selena Gomez/Taylor Swift style Pop.
on Till Kingdom Come by 1992g
on Till Kingdom Come by 1992g
Angelus
on Second Chance by 1992g
on Second Chance by 1992g
on Second Chance by 1992g
on Second Chance by 1992g
Angelus