The introduction is long but it draws you in and makes you want to listen some more. Excellent playing and well recorded and your voice should be pushed a bit further forward in the mix - it's good. A harder drum sound and further forward in the mix would work better for me but I have to say this is great track. Well done. Keep it going. Look forward to hearing more from you.
This is a great track..and you vocals a pretty good too.
I have a few suggestions but shoot me comment to let me know how you recorded this. I think you can take it from a Demo sound to pro.
Were your guitar effects done while recording or after (Per or post)
If it is post like mine using a VST there are a few tricks you can do to make them sound more full. If they were recorded with the effect already on then you can do some duplication and change the EQ to get a more full sound.
Same for the vocals..they need cleaned up a bit in production but you have a good sound. Most of the people that sing do multiple takes of the same track and layer it. I know you buried it a bit because you are not confident in it but you can do the same. And it will clean it up and make it sound more full.
You need to master the track to get all the levels correct.
I do everything myself as well but haven't ventured into the singing part...as I am horrible..lol. Take a listen to my track it is similar style and see if you like the mix. Overall this is one of the best rock tracks I have heard on here. Keep it up
great track! possibly one of my most favorite tracks ive heard thus far. i like that you recorded alot of it, i mean for the most part the instruments a very well recorded, i cant hear any excess feedback or static
i would recommend a little work on the EQ but as is is pretty damn good. your voice is really nice as well, though i think if you downloaded a vst such as Excite or xcita(both are free and should be fairly easy to find using a search engine) it would definitely improve the recording quality of the vox.
i really like the guitars, but could use a limiter on them, because some parts are louder than others and its a little distracting from the song
the bass could use some EQ in my opinion
and i bet if the drums were compressed more, maybe not so much louder but more for clarity-wise
again though i really enjoyed listening to the track, has a lot of emotion put into it instrumentally and vocally, though i couldnt understand much of the lyrics because the vox were kinda so far in the background between the guitars i still liked the quality of your voice
i hope to later hear the finished product! great job and good luck!
-fayz
i'm sure the producers will have something constructive to say - but as this simple listener hears it this song is possessed and indelible - fav'd on the invisible fav button twice
I'll be honest, I had to look up what indelible meant because I was sure it was something negative...but I couldn't believe you actually enjoyed this track, and on such a level. Your words are greatly appreciated, they mean more than you think. Thank you so much!
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on 700 Miles demo by ApolloRush
Best regards
Richie
on 700 Miles demo by ApolloRush
I have a few suggestions but shoot me comment to let me know how you recorded this. I think you can take it from a Demo sound to pro.
Were your guitar effects done while recording or after (Per or post)
If it is post like mine using a VST there are a few tricks you can do to make them sound more full. If they were recorded with the effect already on then you can do some duplication and change the EQ to get a more full sound.
Same for the vocals..they need cleaned up a bit in production but you have a good sound. Most of the people that sing do multiple takes of the same track and layer it. I know you buried it a bit because you are not confident in it but you can do the same. And it will clean it up and make it sound more full.
You need to master the track to get all the levels correct.
I do everything myself as well but haven't ventured into the singing part...as I am horrible..lol. Take a listen to my track it is similar style and see if you like the mix. Overall this is one of the best rock tracks I have heard on here. Keep it up
on 700 Miles demo by ApolloRush
i would recommend a little work on the EQ but as is is pretty damn good. your voice is really nice as well, though i think if you downloaded a vst such as Excite or xcita(both are free and should be fairly easy to find using a search engine) it would definitely improve the recording quality of the vox.
i really like the guitars, but could use a limiter on them, because some parts are louder than others and its a little distracting from the song
the bass could use some EQ in my opinion
and i bet if the drums were compressed more, maybe not so much louder but more for clarity-wise
again though i really enjoyed listening to the track, has a lot of emotion put into it instrumentally and vocally, though i couldnt understand much of the lyrics because the vox were kinda so far in the background between the guitars i still liked the quality of your voice
i hope to later hear the finished product! great job and good luck!
-fayz
on Its All In A Name -Acoustic- by ApolloRush