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ofcourse dear colleague .according to your description below your track''my first song'',I evaluate & ponder this track of yours.first obvious thing in it is a synth melody that althought isn't too throughbred,but it's considered & doesn't try to fill the blank space & moments in track by loud beats ( which is common in such genres),and this Intro shows there's some thought behind composing this track.also althught you've begin by nonekey scale (=A),but your theme is a minor theme.and it shows your are not following the common ideas in this genre .combination of only two sound is not hard , but due to short duration,listener won't get tired .and these points shows a potential creativeness which has a self style & private elegance as the frist attempt has tried on it.best wishes man.___Behnam.

man it was very better than my first attempts,your creativeness is quite sensible & worthy of adoration.
best wishes.
___Behnam