Very good remix mate,your vocals arent too bad.Production wise maybe you could add a pad or one note string on the chorus.Theres some hissing on the background but thats easily fixed me thinks.If you let the piano play for about four bars before you actually start singing that will create some positive antecipation.
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on Grenade remix by me by bdubs2332
on Grenade remix by me by bdubs2332
on Grenade remix by me by bdubs2332
on Grenade remix by me by bdubs2332
All in all good work.
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