Thanks for using one of my guitar loops, I agree with xpekt the track is all over the place, the drums don't really match up. If think were a little more in sync I think it would have a lot of potential.
I don't know if this were your intention but I think you are a little all over the place which makes the track a bit hard to focus on, again don't know if it was intentional, I think that with a little track arrangenment you've got a great track here!!! :)
on margarine butter or fat by pitekusz
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