This like your other track needs to be remixed with the vocals brought down and the instruments up. Getting vocals to sit well in the mix can be tough but is critical to a good mix. Good luck.
You might want to work on the mix. Vocals sit way too far up front and the music is very low in the mix. I thought you were going for a muted backing track that would then become full sounding after the intro but that never happened.
good to hear my guitar loop in a song...when I wrote it never thought that it'll go through 4 minutes...a bit repetitive, you should use some other parts to be interesting...lack of bass or bass synth is very noticeable...your voice is not bad but the recording was a bit weak...I mean it's over volumed and too dry...you can use some reverb on it and get that volume back a tad bit...drum is too monotonuos...there is a software, free from this site called MTPowerdrum2...you can dl it from Looperman, "software" page...
no offense, but it could be a good song with some changes...
Thank you for the input most helpful. Your tracks are great thank you for the MTPowerdrum2 I've been looking for something like this> Thanks again for your input and tracks.
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good to hear my guitar loop in a song...when I wrote it never thought that it'll go through 4 minutes...a bit repetitive, you should use some other parts to be interesting...lack of bass or bass synth is very noticeable...your voice is not bad but the recording was a bit weak...I mean it's over volumed and too dry...you can use some reverb on it and get that volume back a tad bit...drum is too monotonuos...there is a software, free from this site called MTPowerdrum2...you can dl it from Looperman, "software" page...
no offense, but it could be a good song with some changes...
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