FutureFlow1996

i looked into itunes as well, found it to be a bit much for me at the particular point in my life.

i like the live sound of the drums here. i don't think the key you're playing in is the same as the pellas but i do like the track. ever thought about posting it seperately?

sweet

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i really hate to be critical, but the pellas are in a different key than the muzic. sorry.

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i really hate to be critical, but the pellas are in a different key than the muzic. around 0:51 the volume gets a bit lower.
sorry.

maybe a really little change up in here would break up the song a bit. Such as "are you feelin what I'm feelin" maybe a change in the drums or the music or both, or i'll shut up now.

hey! the hook has a different timing but it works, cool!! I think I'm addicted to guitars, I just love guitars, I think they love me too but maybe they just don't know it yet. soft playing guitars, gentle playing guitars, acoustic guitars. not the ones that yell at me. lol.

If you are happy with it, i am happy with it. thanks.

Love it!! It's got enough old-school, and the beat is sick in a simple way, ya know? Get me on a track with you. I'll rip it up.

I can sense the soul of this track!
Very very very nice track bro!
Unlike those mainstream fools like Kanye West, this track has something briliant!

Why havent anyone commented on this?! This is a summer jam! Really like the instrumental as well as the vocals. Thanks for uploading!

I'm sorry. I have to say I wasn't truly feeling this particular track with this particular song. It's seems like the note of the track doesn't really match with the key she's singing in. The beat was perfect. But I'd find another track for the song or another song for the track. Sorry.

it isn't easy to write to vocals, great effort. like the breakdowns in certain parts.

The chorus sounds nice. The arrangement is good too. Maybe switching out some instruments to compliment her voice better. Otherwise good track. Keep working. Only 1 way but up!