Not bad, kinda break-beaty and the drums are washed out by the bass noises, but you have some pretty brutal sounds. I'd say try to get more of a melody going and equalize/widen the instruments and you'll have a sick track. Try to listen to it with fresh ears, and keep improving the intro, build, drop, verses, chorus if u have any, and outtro. Even with no lyrics songs need structure like this so they actually sound like a song instead of just noises.
thanks.....your probly gonna roll off your chair if i tell you i have no idea how to widen the instru....i pretty much contruct my tracks using the playlist browser and drag the loops i like and place em in order ...i got no clue how to adjust the sound they have and when i try i usualy end up ruining the sample....lol....im new to this....a few months exp....thanks
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