Really nice sound to this, reminds me of some old school Ice cube in certain parts. I like the synth work here, and the actual beat is decent. You just need to add few more synths to distinguish a verse & chorus...but good start overall, keep at it!!
Echoing the sentiments of Nuada and OZ you have a great foundation here. Just needs some strings, bass and variation in the drum track (some pauses here and there) if you can incorporate some of these elements you will be sitting on a hit :)
Nice re verb on the acoustic sample, a nice beats complements the sound a solid composition job well done my friend keep making music and best of luck in your talent
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truely i didn't like
i loved it man no i adored it
it's realy a very nice track
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