Pretty decent for you first track, probably way better than my first track which was horrible lol! A little work on the bass is needed as well as a better way of closing the song, other than that, pretty good start...good luck!!
Hey, Colt! You at least get credit for trying. The bass did sound a bit distorted. Yeah, and the track was not completely developed, but it really doesn't sound all that bad for starting out. Keep listening and making music. You can only get better. A lot of the battle is just learning the basics of song structure. You go by what you think sounds good and then you can let others like the ones on Looperman give you advice and input. I'd say just listen to a lot of music in the style you would like to make.
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-David
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Keep them coming, My Friend
John
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