Sounds slick man! The instruments you used matched the vocals well. Yeah like Frankie said if you added a bit of rap between the hooks it would sound amazing bro.
Sounds really good man, good work! Your welcome to use this in anyway you would like, besides selling it. I like it better then the original song I made, the beat gives it a better emotion in my opinion, again good work man keep it up. If you ever got a beat that needs a track on it I would happy to work with you..
This is nice dog, possibly worthy of the radio once you refine it a bit. If it were mine, I would add some lyrics in between the hook, someone with a nice laid back flow. I would be interested to hear the vocals without the synth or with the synth turned down a bit, only cause it competes with the voice. I wanted to continue listening to it, you planning on making it longer?
If the guy who I used the acapella from confirms that I could do that then sure. And yeah the synth is a little conflicting but I did a quick upload so its not how I want it.
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