sexiboi21

I agree with Blackbirdproduction with that zap. Otherwise everything part of this piece is just great. Keep coming we are waiting. God bless

I am not really a professional myself, but I will try to give you some feedback.

The melody is nice, good job... I kept listening, so that's a good thing. Nice sound!

However, the zap (used somewhere in the middle) was a bit distracting and the bass-line doesn't really fit into the song... it's too simple and too loud. Perhaps you should practice more on that.