Alternative

Hiya Alt. Loved the chilled & trancy intro but I'm with Toonz on this. The discordant piano jars the ears immensely. Is that what you hoped/looked for ? If so try a string of piano chords that break & jangle instead perhaps ? The rest of the track is really good my friend

I love the intro... but it seems to go down hill immediately when the piano is introduced.

That piano is really off key and your track suffers a great deal for it,... I think you should take it out personally.

There are elements that don't fit together at all,... then there are parts that do work well together... like the piano and opera singer bit... But this track, rather than chill me out... has left me kind of confused.

Sorry for the criticism, but keep at it :)

Toonz

good attempt and nice one... well done for your first track

Hi Alternative. This is a really promising trance track, that has some really nice elements and feel to it. I enjoyed listening to it very much.

If I offer some advice, listen to other artists on this site as it will provide you with much inspiration.

Keep them coming.

This is a good go for your first song. Has me swaying in the background. I would like some kicks to come in earlier do. Nice job

Keep Hustling
Aclraine

I like this for several reasons. Great moderate beat, sounds good and has me moving :-)

Keep them coming

John

This is great, well done for your first. I to enjoy some of the qualities of trance. But one thing with this is that the opening is just extended a little to long.

Just one. As will be good. and we think the second

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Cool track! Very nice mix! I have to say I am really impressed this is your first track. Keep it up I am anxious to see how you progress!

An interesting beginning. But for me, too long you could give a different sound yet to do some ARP or second. but cool:}

I'd like to do a song with you. Trance

and what do you think about these two

1. https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/107928

2. https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/108058

Nice 1st upload my friend. Sweet intro then on to some nice, trippy trance. Good use of the pianos