hi i want to say the synth in the beginning is dope sounds aggressive but thane the snares its like a dubstep snare you need to make it short an make it pop by layering. the hi hats in the middle i think can work. the kick need compression tot make it bang and i think you need to ad a sub layer to make the dig boom effect on this track. but i think there is potential in this track. keep it up!
on Master plan by icebaron