Well, the good news is I think it all sounds pretty good; one point you can work a bit more is that it's of course a bit repetitive, but that might be your intention if you want it to be used as a beat for rapping, so that might be fine.
Have you thought about taking a rap from the acapella section and see if you can make that work? That would be really interesting I think!
Thank you for the reply BaoBou, I do have some problems with the arrangements, and you made a really great point, I should put an acapella on my track. I would assume that would help with the arrangement structure.
That loop is fantastic but this can't even be called a song with a good mood... you should widen that crativity to use some drums, bass and surprising instruments (synths, fxes) to get this finished ...
fistbump, Danke
on Reclamation of Independence by nikbeat3
Have you thought about taking a rap from the acapella section and see if you can make that work? That would be really interesting I think!
on DEAD SUMMER by nikbeat3
That loop is fantastic but this can't even be called a song with a good mood... you should widen that crativity to use some drums, bass and surprising instruments (synths, fxes) to get this finished ...
fistbump, Danke