Nice start to the track, flows nicely, all follows nice too. Drums are good, esp. the tom sounds and the constant kick is also fine. I like it. I also like the way it builds up throughout, quite gradual and interesting. The ending could be a bit different I feel personally like I missed something and then got disappointed. Saying that I still enjoyed your track very much. Well done
Bullitt, thats a menacing intro, great bassline, its a builder very cinematic and could fit a few different fields, i would have liked a bigger bang around the 1.12 mark like the 2.00 min one but i guess your building suspense, great work nontheless, your description is spot on dark and brooding, good work
Thank you. I would have listed this as Synthwave tbh, but it's not an option in the genre section. Eitherway, I'm glad you liked it and thanks for listening to it and leaving feedback. Thanks.
Hi Anthony, thanks for your kind words, it's always appreciated. Overall, I'm pleased with the song, but there's always room for improvement. Glad you liked it. Thanks.
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I listened to this, and as I did, it reminded me a lot of the mid/late 90s and early 00s industrial bands. Assemblage 23 to be specific. Maybe some Wupscut if it had more distortion. But that's not important. We're here to celebrate your track. Not theirs.
I, for the most part, agree with Manuela on her assessment. As it stands, it's a great track. You've mixed it well, and it has plenty panning and spacial dynamics that give it movement. It does have enough change ups that, overall, it's not a monotonous track at all.
I think, personally, I would have added a few impacts and dowlifters for that extra little touch that would make this song soar above and beyond. Especially at the 2:10 mark like Manuela had mentioned. A good impact right there would kick that section off with great power. But, you know, that's just, like, my opinion, man. Take it for what it's worth. As I said, this is great the way it is. Even if you change nothing.
Take care.
V.
Hi V, thanks for your feedback, much appreciated. It's good to get constructive feedback as I think it helps you develop as a musician. Thanks for taking the time to comment, much appreciated.
Hello BullittVolante, just checked out your track, I like the percussions right away, the keys and synths are awful nice and sort of ease into the track at the beginning but hit harder later....its a nice piece of music.....very good work.
Hey Bullit. I'm really liking this. That bass line is fantastic. Such a good groove. Your mix is done very well, and you have a lot of movement. Which, to me, is important in minimalist tracks.
I agree with Danke, it could almost be trip-hop, or even chill-out. But, as he also said, genres really don't matter. It's just a good track, and that's what matters.
Excellent work.
Take care.
V.
Hi V, thanks for leaving some feedback, it's much appreciated. Glad you liked the track. yeah, tbh, I wasn't sure what genre to file this under? It was a choice between Trip Hop, Chill Out and Ambient. I chose Ambient in the end, tho there are elements of the other two genres in there. like you say, it doesn't really matter. Thanks again.
Yeah, I would have listed this as Synthwave if I could tbh. But thanks for listening to the track and leaving feedback, it's always appreciated. Thank you.
Greetings, This track did throw down some good old memories for me on memorie lane. The genre synthwave was also found around the 80s. And it does captures the synthwavy elements in this song very well. So i do like it. And this was certainly a joy to listen to. So well done indeed. So keep up the good work & keep on creating. Have a good one & one love, Verdi
Hi Verdi, thanks for listening to the track and leaving some feedback, it's much appreciated and a good way to grow as a musician. I'm glad you liked the track, I'm pleased with it, but there's always room for improvement, which is why the comments section on LM is so important. Thanks.
A criminal in leather, hitting the road on a motorbike, full pelt, on the run - that's what I saw in my head when I heard this - a great, thought-provoking composition
Really nice work, the rhythm is awesome (you have done a perfect work with the drum loops) and the BBC symphony VST added some classic spice to your melodies.
Very well done.
Best regards, Anthony
Hi Anthony, thanks for your kind words, glad you liked the track. Yeah, I was pleased with the drums as it took me a while to sequence them. Many thanks.
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I didd enjoy it .
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this is pure synthwave
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I listened to this, and as I did, it reminded me a lot of the mid/late 90s and early 00s industrial bands. Assemblage 23 to be specific. Maybe some Wupscut if it had more distortion. But that's not important. We're here to celebrate your track. Not theirs.
I, for the most part, agree with Manuela on her assessment. As it stands, it's a great track. You've mixed it well, and it has plenty panning and spacial dynamics that give it movement. It does have enough change ups that, overall, it's not a monotonous track at all.
I think, personally, I would have added a few impacts and dowlifters for that extra little touch that would make this song soar above and beyond. Especially at the 2:10 mark like Manuela had mentioned. A good impact right there would kick that section off with great power. But, you know, that's just, like, my opinion, man. Take it for what it's worth. As I said, this is great the way it is. Even if you change nothing.
Take care.
V.
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Overall great piece, really enjoyed in listening.
Cheers!
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I agree with Danke, it could almost be trip-hop, or even chill-out. But, as he also said, genres really don't matter. It's just a good track, and that's what matters.
Excellent work.
Take care.
V.
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Very well done.
Best regards, Anthony