Nice track man. I dig your flows. Beat was cool. Simple is better sometimes and the overall vibe of the track was clean and simple which is a good thing the way you did it. Not all tracks need to punch you in the face. It more less whatever you want it to be nah mean. Keep doing work man!
Real giantic piece of work, when it comes to tha vokalz. Fo me personnally az a "Classic Sample Hater", this beat doesnt fit to ya fine chillin spitfire (& wit a otha beat probably one may light up a little bleezy too, y. k. w. i. s. ???)
I hope you can take this as constructive criticism and not someone who is hating on you. I see potential in your music but it needs work. The beat was really simple with almost no energy and it was hard to hang with. Your telling a good story but your rhyme style had not many changes and lacked energy. I think your rhymes as well were kinda simple but I say all these things not knowing how long you been making music or for that matter even how old you are anyways just my thoughts. Feel free to peep my page and music and drop a review peace Evolution
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Keep doin ya thang, man cause ya got big potential !!!!
Peace,
Da Colonel
on BYE by Khrys
Big ups
Da Colonel
on All Around by Khrys
should be worked out wit a little mo time 1
Peace
Da Colonel
on Rock The World by Khrys
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a great song - i'd spend money
i sent u a message via the contact page on ur profile, dunno if u'll recieve it, but could u check...
cheers - great track
theFISHface
on Rock The World by Khrys
Anyways, I really like what you did, very creative and well executed.
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