This is very good for your first rap! I was not that good when I first started. All you need is some better beats, practice and a better microphone! I can offer you the beats if you're interested.
Big ups!
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hey man its good i like it .if u can send that one but like 4 min long? miclo712003@hotmail.com... i want to make a song on it but sure in spanish hehehe..thanks
It started off kinda hype until cause started rapping. that's where I feel the track lost it's energy. Maybe go over the beat again & change a few thing's & drop it again. "WE" can only get better and remember "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
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Your beat fits perfect in this change.
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you can use it on your album.
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Big ups!
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failingtimes out!!!!
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yes instrumental is also by me.
Thank you for listening.
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and thank you for your comment.
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I'll try to fix it...I made this beat in 30 min!(sorry for my bad english)