This sounds like something I heard on the radio, I think it's "Come into my bedroom or welcome to my sex room" Trey songs I believe. Good try though, should have rapped to your own beat, not to put what you're trying to do with this down or anything but I think you could be more original than that. Until the next track "Keep'em comin & Keep'em movin".
on Going In Circles by Prophecy09