Good vocal - you have a good voice! But the loop appears to be basically only one 4 bars repeated throughout the song, and if you could vary that a bit more I think you have a stronger track! Good luck!
It's a cool rap! But I don't think you need that much processing on your vocal. I know the feeling of wanting to hide your own voice, but no need. I think it will sound better with less distortion!
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