yeah i deff feel what Mahloo13 is saying... that chorus would be way better if you made it come to life more, and just a bit more dbs on your drum and u got yourself a hit lol
The drums need to come up a bit and be more defined. At the moment he guitars sound nice and deep but you can hardly tell there is a drum track in there, the hi-hats are obvious but the kick and snare are gone.
Also the chorus parts are a bit to mono compared to the wide feel of the verse parts so work a bit on the doubling and widening of that chorus.
I agree with conohamaru, it did feel a little out in places, I think you could either slow the drum beats down or speed them up to bring it in line with the bass, it does have a metallica feel to it, If you were going for the off beat effect you may need to listen to it again, you can pull it off, just try.Dont waste it, keep at it.
Okay, this has been done really well,nevertheless It can still use some notches hear and there, and it sounds a little unorganized. You shouldn't worry about that to much though. Still a very good attempt to rock.
You should get a few pointers or tips from my Rock song called "Mach5"
Excellent mix!! I love the drum pattern and the vocal samples you used!!! Please check out my song "Keep It Movin" I'm a teenage producer and I need all the reviews I can get!!
Nice catchy track. Drums and other layers are out of sync and some come in too early. Also a bit jumpy at the end of most bars. Fix that and you're sorted.
I dug this up to about the 40 sec marc, after that the timing is off. But, man that first part is awesome, I like the beat and the riff. Add a bass and you there, it's a nice melody with great potential, I'd like to hear a more developed version. Keep it up!
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Also the chorus parts are a bit to mono compared to the wide feel of the verse parts so work a bit on the doubling and widening of that chorus.
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Nice job though.
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