HappyNZ

It's a pretty decent song mate. Good vocal performance and melody, endearing lyrics. Nice one. All the best, Zoot.

great job!!!

Kia ora bro, nice work on the track. Production sounds great. Never been much of a fan of the whole autotune vocal thing but it does fit this track. Pretty nice mellow vibe. I'm a fan of Avantdale Bowling Club too:) Cheers Zoot

nice track bro, i too do subjects that people shy away from.
this is my latest in featured, it ties in nicely with your theme if you would like the vocal or part of, im cool even a feature. let me know. otherwise great work anyways
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/243350

Hey, I can sing on this track

I like it pretty much as it is bro. Love the lyrics and your vox sound really good and genuine. A serious subject too, especially in good ole NZ with our atrocious stats on suicide, particularly teens and young adults. Nice work.