Dude, This is like . Rap... But like... REAL RAP.. not that stupid crap thats all over the radio, Theres so much Real RAW instruments in this and i love it, Its Poetry, Spoken Word, rap and a Simple instrumental all in one, Wow. a Favorite for sure, If you ever want free professional mastering, Hit me up, I'll do it for free if you keep coming up with stuff like this. Love it!
This type of feedback makes it all worth doing and is much appreciated. I would love to have you remaster my tracks , I don't know if I have the patience to master tracks. Or maybe I'm just not good at it. harumerti@gmail.com e-mail me and I will send you the beat and vocals individually.
I myself mostly listen to other types of music but making hip hop is in my heart. I will reach out to everyone who leaves a comment and listen to your stuff when I can and provide feedback. My hats of to all who leave any type of feedback.
Ben, the concept of the track is gold but you got to work on the vocals bro, smooth them out - you can hear it when Romy's vocal kicked in at the intro and the vocals are all floating over the track like a fairy. Turning up the volume of the instrumental would be a quick fix though, you know what I mean..
You sound like "Tame One" from Wu Tang Clan, half these rapper's on this site would kill to sound like you, make them burn by flowing better. By flow I dont mean lyrics, I mean you should be riding the beat bro. Im not being asshole bro, I want to do it right..
This type of feedback I appreciate the most. I know I can fix the areas that you mention and I know exactly what you mean. I need to take my time and take more time to perfect each bar and make the rythem of the flow match the beat better...
OK !! Please come visit my soundcloud page and listen to what I am about, and from there let us see what happen's my friend ? I could work with you in a possitive manner :)
much appreciated , I know what you mean that was the topic of my song stop buyin' dem lies ... Im currently trying to put together a demo disc and album and see what happens... with the internet you can make a name for yourself without getting signed just gotta hustle put in the work and promote yourself
We really appreciate you taking the time to listen and respond... the fact that this track moved you and took you back in time is dope to hear. Our next track "Vinyl" should do the same...
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/148105 there is the link to the remix I did of the vocals you uploaded. thanks for the upload I haven't done a spoken word track yet. glad I could put my spin on it.
great lyrics but I think you upload vocals to the acapella section where your loops are, I know how to find the bpm for it but others might not I would add what the bpm is in the description. other then that thanks for the upload
We appreciate you taking the time to listen to the whole track and leave feedback... its only 2 rappers MCBenEvolent on verse 1 and Deep Thought on verse 2 and the hook
It's a pretty cool beat and DeepThought9's rapping is good.
My main criticism is that the track is too quiet, as you can probably see from the small waveform. You don't want it to be too loud like a lot of stuff on the site (including some of my own stuff, unfortunately, not got round to fixing it yet).
Maybe the track is a bit short and doesn't really develop a lot but what you have is good work that moves really well.
on New World Featuring Romy Harmony by LeeVoorhees
on New World Featuring Romy Harmony by LeeVoorhees
Orlando
on New World Featuring Romy Harmony by LeeVoorhees
You sound like "Tame One" from Wu Tang Clan, half these rapper's on this site would kill to sound like you, make them burn by flowing better. By flow I dont mean lyrics, I mean you should be riding the beat bro. Im not being asshole bro, I want to do it right..
on New World Featuring Romy Harmony by LeeVoorhees
on Star Light by LeeVoorhees
on Star Light by LeeVoorhees
on Star Light by LeeVoorhees
mad respect for conscious emcees keeping it real
divine minds combine unified as one.
can't stop, won't stop, don't stop shining like the sun.
word up.
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on Vinyl featuring DeepThought9 and One Tone by LeeVoorhees
on Vinyl featuring DeepThought9 and One Tone by LeeVoorhees
on Vinyl featuring DeepThought9 and One Tone by LeeVoorhees
on Vinyl featuring DeepThought9 and One Tone by LeeVoorhees
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on Re Paint Tomarow by LeeVoorhees
Soul Aum
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My main criticism is that the track is too quiet, as you can probably see from the small waveform. You don't want it to be too loud like a lot of stuff on the site (including some of my own stuff, unfortunately, not got round to fixing it yet).
Maybe the track is a bit short and doesn't really develop a lot but what you have is good work that moves really well.
on Soul Perception featuring DeepThought9 by LeeVoorhees
on There is a Way by LeeVoorhees